Stretch Marks
Celebrating our bodies' changes!6 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about stretch marks. I had three sons; two were twin sons and one just normal birth. When I was younger the marks bothered me some, but not to the point of obsession. I am thankful I was three healthy, great sons. Thanks for a great poem you have penned! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem about stretch marks. I had three sons; two were twin sons and one just normal birth. When I was younger the marks bothered me some, but not to the point of obsession. I am thankful I was three healthy, great sons. Thanks for a great poem you have penned! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
Comment from George Jr
I love the inspiration in your poem Cassidy. I wish all would see the good. Id like to offer a small correction, "have overcame" should read have overcome. Refreshing to Read. All things have beauty if perceived from light. Great job. Thank you for sharing
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I love the inspiration in your poem Cassidy. I wish all would see the good. Id like to offer a small correction, "have overcame" should read have overcome. Refreshing to Read. All things have beauty if perceived from light. Great job. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
Comment from Ricky1024
Hi dear I enjoyed your stretch marks we all seem to have them to some degree limited or whatever and on our particular situations what are we it seems like an odd thing to write about but everybody into he's the wrong Happy Valentine's Day thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
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Hi dear I enjoyed your stretch marks we all seem to have them to some degree limited or whatever and on our particular situations what are we it seems like an odd thing to write about but everybody into he's the wrong Happy Valentine's Day thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks we wish to erase stretch marks from our bodies; they are natural, wonderful, part of our lives; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks we wish to erase stretch marks from our bodies; they are natural, wonderful, part of our lives; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As we go through life we collect individual scares that make us who we are. My daughter just had an operation on her arm that has left a scar and she cried when she saw it, but I said that this is one of her scars to be proud of, one of life's journey scars, I wish you well, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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As we go through life we collect individual scares that make us who we are. My daughter just had an operation on her arm that has left a scar and she cried when she saw it, but I said that this is one of her scars to be proud of, one of life's journey scars, I wish you well, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a generous rating, and sharing the story of your daughter! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my work. Much love you and your daughter!
-Cassidy
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the growing concern of humans over the perceived problem of stretch marks and the need for them to see it as a normal biological phenomenon.
The work highlights the writer's inclination to persuade antagonists of the phenomenon to see it as a normal physiological process than seeing it as an anomaly.
The work earns its texture through the use of similes and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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The work reminisces the growing concern of humans over the perceived problem of stretch marks and the need for them to see it as a normal biological phenomenon.
The work highlights the writer's inclination to persuade antagonists of the phenomenon to see it as a normal physiological process than seeing it as an anomaly.
The work earns its texture through the use of similes and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much for your generous review, as well as taking time to read my work! I appreciate you! Your comment has made my day with your kind words. Thank you again!
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Remain Blessed!
