I Was Born To
A story of life14 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is written in a very interesting and unusual style.
The word "become" I think you mean became. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is written in a very interesting and unusual style.
The word "become" I think you mean became. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from royowen
I remember doing a course called psycho cybernetics, (which means from the Greek, steersman) one set an image in one's mind about a goal in their life, and after 21 days, it would start to materialise, I never really tried it, God had other plans. Beautifully written with a very comprehensive and orderly well laid reminder, something to stick on the fridge to read every day. Well done, blesings. Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I remember doing a course called psycho cybernetics, (which means from the Greek, steersman) one set an image in one's mind about a goal in their life, and after 21 days, it would start to materialise, I never really tried it, God had other plans. Beautifully written with a very comprehensive and orderly well laid reminder, something to stick on the fridge to read every day. Well done, blesings. Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you Roy for your review. I believe I will keep it on the fridge to keep me motivated. RJ
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever poem with a shape of a heart monitor counting the heart-beats! Your write is filled with all the good things in life with some advice along the way, lovely, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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This is a clever poem with a shape of a heart monitor counting the heart-beats! Your write is filled with all the good things in life with some advice along the way, lovely, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from Quoiky
Very nice work. I enjoyed your courageous thoughts and I know you will succeed in your quest, whatever that may be. This flows well and subtly reminds me that... I was born too, and I need to live.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Very nice work. I enjoyed your courageous thoughts and I know you will succeed in your quest, whatever that may be. This flows well and subtly reminds me that... I was born too, and I need to live.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you Quoiky for your comments. RJ
