Summer to Autumn
changing seasons contest10 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author your first verse starts how of how drab the season of autumn is real described
Hello author your first verse has very good drab images of Autumn
I 'm wondering why you changed autumn to come before summer
I like both of your 'explicit image of summer and autumn
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Hello author your first verse starts how of how drab the season of autumn is real described
Hello author your first verse has very good drab images of Autumn
I 'm wondering why you changed autumn to come before summer
I like both of your 'explicit image of summer and autumn
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the season transition from summer to autumn. The summer slowly cools down and the grass start to turn brown and the leaves fall from the trees and autumn becomes the new season.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem about the season transition from summer to autumn. The summer slowly cools down and the grass start to turn brown and the leaves fall from the trees and autumn becomes the new season.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
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Comment from Harry Smith
What a beautiful picture that made this poem. The poem is very well written with lots of imagery that was brought to live by the picture. I enjoyed the poem very much.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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What a beautiful picture that made this poem. The poem is very well written with lots of imagery that was brought to live by the picture. I enjoyed the poem very much.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
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Comment from Henry King
Review by Henry: This verse is full of nature with explicit and colorful word images. It did not deliver the message of change from summer to autumn. It begins with dry brown autumn, then summer heat, changes to winter when crickets disappear, then ends with spring's rebirth. Maybe, shuffling the verses would present that stated change.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Review by Henry: This verse is full of nature with explicit and colorful word images. It did not deliver the message of change from summer to autumn. It begins with dry brown autumn, then summer heat, changes to winter when crickets disappear, then ends with spring's rebirth. Maybe, shuffling the verses would present that stated change.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Comment from Kathy Allmon
It was beautiful. I loved how you described the changing of seasons from summer to autumn. The picture you chose was great. I think its good to change it to suit what you are writing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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It was beautiful. I loved how you described the changing of seasons from summer to autumn. The picture you chose was great. I think its good to change it to suit what you are writing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
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Comment from tfawcus
Your description of the two seasons certainly resonates with me in this part of the world. All is dry and sere here at the moment. I can't wait to feel the cool rain of autumn as it soaks into the soil bringing the prospect of new life.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Your description of the two seasons certainly resonates with me in this part of the world. All is dry and sere here at the moment. I can't wait to feel the cool rain of autumn as it soaks into the soil bringing the prospect of new life.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is an excellent shifting seasons contest entry that reminisces a semblance of relay relay race between summer and autumn.
The work highlights the drying up of leaves, cricket sounds,windy,hot weather that occasions outings at the beach as synonymous with the summer season, while rainfall, fresh green leaves, sunshine and twittering birds characterise that of autumn.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, simile and imagery.
Excellent work ! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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This is an excellent shifting seasons contest entry that reminisces a semblance of relay relay race between summer and autumn.
The work highlights the drying up of leaves, cricket sounds,windy,hot weather that occasions outings at the beach as synonymous with the summer season, while rainfall, fresh green leaves, sunshine and twittering birds characterise that of autumn.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, simile and imagery.
Excellent work ! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely poem and it is illustrated beautifully. I love the explicit images that you create for both seasons. I can just hear the birds and crickets. I do have one suggestion though. I can barely read the words, except for those in yellow. I would keep the background, just embolden the words. Except for that, I would not change a thing.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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What a lovely poem and it is illustrated beautifully. I love the explicit images that you create for both seasons. I can just hear the birds and crickets. I do have one suggestion though. I can barely read the words, except for those in yellow. I would keep the background, just embolden the words. Except for that, I would not change a thing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a picture here of shades of autumn and how summer is left behind, i wish you luck with the contest, your art work is perfect, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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You painted a picture here of shades of autumn and how summer is left behind, i wish you luck with the contest, your art work is perfect, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Shifting Seasons writing prompt.
Well said and you paint a clear picture with your words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Shifting Seasons writing prompt.
Well said and you paint a clear picture with your words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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