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Comment from angel123
Your poem has a great ending and it flows with humor. Your artwork choice enhances your message and good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Angel123
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Your poem has a great ending and it flows with humor. Your artwork choice enhances your message and good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Angel123
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello angel, I am pleased that you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Nice poem. Perfect graphic. And, you're right, it is the perfect definition of confidence! I'm curious, this was a surprising entry. What prompted you to write it, might I ask? Well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Nice poem. Perfect graphic. And, you're right, it is the perfect definition of confidence! I'm curious, this was a surprising entry. What prompted you to write it, might I ask? Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hi Susan, I appreciate your visit and the kind review, thank you very much.
Comment from jppoet
tHIS IS A FRIVOLOUS FROLIC OF FUN AND FANTASY, EVEN IF I FAIL TO FIND ANY PUNS AND EXPECTED A FUZZIER FOOLISHY FINAL FIVE SYLLABLES. THE FOTO IS FUN.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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tHIS IS A FRIVOLOUS FROLIC OF FUN AND FANTASY, EVEN IF I FAIL TO FIND ANY PUNS AND EXPECTED A FUZZIER FOOLISHY FINAL FIVE SYLLABLES. THE FOTO IS FUN.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Wow! A wonderful review loaded with superb alliteration; thank you very much my friend.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hello Sharon, thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Good 5-7-5, Anonymous Poet, very "witty" and clever.
Ya know, evidence from zoos suggests elephants get along just fine with mice. Elephants often eat hay.
Mice can often be found in and around the elephants' hay, and zookeepers have reported elephants usually don't pay any attention to them. In fact, some elephants don't even seem to mind mice crawling on their faces and trunks.
Elephant experts will tell you elephants have no logical reason to be afraid of mice. In fact they'll even tell you that healthy elephants don't fear any other animals because of their size and lack of natural predators.
So, despite the old urban legend that elephants are afraid of mice, it seems that elephants aren't all that concerned with the diminutive creatures after all.
Any reaction they have may have more to do with surprise than fear.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Good 5-7-5, Anonymous Poet, very "witty" and clever.
Ya know, evidence from zoos suggests elephants get along just fine with mice. Elephants often eat hay.
Mice can often be found in and around the elephants' hay, and zookeepers have reported elephants usually don't pay any attention to them. In fact, some elephants don't even seem to mind mice crawling on their faces and trunks.
Elephant experts will tell you elephants have no logical reason to be afraid of mice. In fact they'll even tell you that healthy elephants don't fear any other animals because of their size and lack of natural predators.
So, despite the old urban legend that elephants are afraid of mice, it seems that elephants aren't all that concerned with the diminutive creatures after all.
Any reaction they have may have more to do with surprise than fear.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Wow! What an educational review, much obliged my friend, I am honored and grateful for your visit and wonderful insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and it is said that only elephants have true consciousness. Your write is fun and has been brought to life by the centre line, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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This is a fun write and it is said that only elephants have true consciousness. Your write is fun and has been brought to life by the centre line, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hello Dolly, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a great 5-7-5 poem, your words and artwork accompany each other so well, made me giggle, particularly the last line which completes this lovely poem brilliantly.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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What a great 5-7-5 poem, your words and artwork accompany each other so well, made me giggle, particularly the last line which completes this lovely poem brilliantly.
Mitchell
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hello friend, I am glad that you like the write; appreciate your time and the encouraging review; thank you very much.
Comment from Sherman541
This does not look like Horton, at all. LOL - If you do not know, he is a Dr. Seuss Character. I think you did a fine job of connecting mouse and elephant for a fun animal poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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This does not look like Horton, at all. LOL - If you do not know, he is a Dr. Seuss Character. I think you did a fine job of connecting mouse and elephant for a fun animal poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hello Sherman, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
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you are very welcome - Again, Good Luck!
Comment from Sis Cat
Your witty rat-to-elephant poem made me smile. It made me recall Aesop fables about small rats with big foes. Of course, these rodents show a lot of confidence. Your poem is amusing, and I love the rat's boastful dialogue.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much success with your funny entry.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Your witty rat-to-elephant poem made me smile. It made me recall Aesop fables about small rats with big foes. Of course, these rodents show a lot of confidence. Your poem is amusing, and I love the rat's boastful dialogue.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much success with your funny entry.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hello Andre, I appreciate your time and am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
