I asked of God... part 1
Find a hole...50 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
Well, I found part one squished in with a bunch of those contest votes I was saving till the end.
Beautiful poem, Roy. And truth is wherever you write.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Well, I found part one squished in with a bunch of those contest votes I was saving till the end.
Beautiful poem, Roy. And truth is wherever you write.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thanks Marla, for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from ameen786
Mother Teresa is a great example of reflecting the true purpose of life; I am humbled reading this brilliant verse as well as your own dedication in serving God; God bless you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Mother Teresa is a great example of reflecting the true purpose of life; I am humbled reading this brilliant verse as well as your own dedication in serving God; God bless you.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thanks Ameen for these super words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Well, you certainly received your answer! I attended a Catholic elementary school, and believe me, cleaning was always a high priority! Your poem flows well.
If I may point out: You wrote in the third line: "Its" and this needs to be changed to "It's" or "It is."
Best Wishes and keep cleaning!
diane
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello!
Well, you certainly received your answer! I attended a Catholic elementary school, and believe me, cleaning was always a high priority! Your poem flows well.
If I may point out: You wrote in the third line: "Its" and this needs to be changed to "It's" or "It is."
Best Wishes and keep cleaning!
diane
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thanks Diane for these marvellous words and great review, and the typo catch blessings, Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is so very true my friend. Such great heartfelt words you have penned. When the Lord touched me and brought me back to the living I started helping clean the church also. It is one of my greatest joys. I used not to envision myself as a janitor, but now I am happy to be one for the Lord's house! How He can change us is so remarkable isn't it! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Roy, This is so very true my friend. Such great heartfelt words you have penned. When the Lord touched me and brought me back to the living I started helping clean the church also. It is one of my greatest joys. I used not to envision myself as a janitor, but now I am happy to be one for the Lord's house! How He can change us is so remarkable isn't it! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks Teri, so true, thanks for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
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I hope you and Elaine have a very blessed and restful night!
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We did dear Teri,
Comment from AnnaLinda
Roy,,
Wonderful poem, wonderful theme and background for this top rated
piece! That's a theme I've heard before in church...be willing to clean
the toilet...I don't even like cleaning my own toilet.
Nice rhythm and rhyme. "Its just so hard to ever learn -- "
I believe you need and apostrophe in "its" as it is a contraction.
I won't be attending church and I definitely won't be cleaning it.
The church flushed me down the toilet long ago..and there is no
bitterness whatsoever...just wisdom.
Linda
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Roy,,
Wonderful poem, wonderful theme and background for this top rated
piece! That's a theme I've heard before in church...be willing to clean
the toilet...I don't even like cleaning my own toilet.
Nice rhythm and rhyme. "Its just so hard to ever learn -- "
I believe you need and apostrophe in "its" as it is a contraction.
I won't be attending church and I definitely won't be cleaning it.
The church flushed me down the toilet long ago..and there is no
bitterness whatsoever...just wisdom.
Linda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks Linda, for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
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Thanks Linda, for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from rtobaygo
Good afternoon, Roy
Enjoyed the poem and the story. Yes, God does work in different ways. I see it in little things, which others might see as serendipitous or take as mere chance, that make me aware he's around.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Good afternoon, Roy
Enjoyed the poem and the story. Yes, God does work in different ways. I see it in little things, which others might see as serendipitous or take as mere chance, that make me aware he's around.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks Ray for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
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Thanks Ray for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
Love the word. He does, He expects to have a pure heart that we may see Him. With a pure heart a servant is born. Obedience creates activity and finds its way into eon. Well done, Bro.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Love the word. He does, He expects to have a pure heart that we may see Him. With a pure heart a servant is born. Obedience creates activity and finds its way into eon. Well done, Bro.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks Bro, tasks the Master sets quite often jolt us out of our "stronghold" thanks for the great review Ben,blessings, Roy
Comment from doggymad
This was an thought provoking write Roy. We can never hope to achieve His level of perfection, but should be proud to serve him.
No all would see cleaning the church as a 'calling', but after all it is where His presence is the strongest.
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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This was an thought provoking write Roy. We can never hope to achieve His level of perfection, but should be proud to serve him.
No all would see cleaning the church as a 'calling', but after all it is where His presence is the strongest.
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks Freda, for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Boogienights
Well, I read them out of order so I understand part two better. Both parts are very well written, I just love how the words flow. True story? Once again very interesting story.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Well, I read them out of order so I understand part two better. Both parts are very well written, I just love how the words flow. True story? Once again very interesting story.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much, yes this is very true, I still clean the church to this day, but it's the other things that have blossomed. Thanks for these marvellous words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from TAB_that's me
Such a wonderful thing for you do and a wonderful story poem as well. I like to volunteer - don't have much time now but do so when I can. I hope to do more when I retire. We did some service while on vacation last month in St. Croix, us virgin islands. It feels holes in my heart:)
teresa
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Such a wonderful thing for you do and a wonderful story poem as well. I like to volunteer - don't have much time now but do so when I can. I hope to do more when I retire. We did some service while on vacation last month in St. Croix, us virgin islands. It feels holes in my heart:)
teresa
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Good on you Teresa, yes I'm involved in work that accomadate my other talents these days, but still cleaning, there is still an absence of volunteers for church cleaning, thanks for the great review, blesings, Roy
