Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha;
What a wonderful thought - to equate memories failing to the falling of leaves. It really does make sense. The bare trees are truly resemblant of a person who has lost their basis of life,

~patty~

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thanks so much

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The images are perfect for this write and you painted a sad picture of leaves falling and leaving a gaping hole in our head when there is great memory loss, love the last line, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

THANKS very much

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

The last two words seem out of place and off a little from the other part of the piece that is showing confusion and dread in excellent words

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

THANKS I WILL LOOK