What is Love?
Once bitten, oh my.12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Valentine's acrostic spelling love bugs. It is quite hard to ignore it when a love bug bites us. The other person is seldom not on our mind.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
A very well-written Valentine's acrostic spelling love bugs. It is quite hard to ignore it when a love bug bites us. The other person is seldom not on our mind.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much for reviewing, I really appreciate your kind comments, so true once bitten, its too late.
Comment from Pantygynt
His and hers bicycles in the distorted view commonly found in those who love. The frog is there suggesting that perhapsh has not yet found her handsome prince despite the kisses. Circumstances can often be interpreted in different ways and vision is distorted by love. Both artwork and poem compliment each other neatly in this tongue in cheek Valentine offering.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
His and hers bicycles in the distorted view commonly found in those who love. The frog is there suggesting that perhapsh has not yet found her handsome prince despite the kisses. Circumstances can often be interpreted in different ways and vision is distorted by love. Both artwork and poem compliment each other neatly in this tongue in cheek Valentine offering.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Now I am impressed that you broke down the picture in such detail. It called to me because I saw those things and the uniqueness of it. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Zue65
I do admit I am a fan of love poems too, and this work satisfied my cravings for such Thanks for sharing a very well done piece and the picture is really cute that complements well the message of the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
I do admit I am a fan of love poems too, and this work satisfied my cravings for such Thanks for sharing a very well done piece and the picture is really cute that complements well the message of the poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from MelB
Hello, this is a well written acrostic and entry for the Valentine's poetry contest. Love can certainly bite sometimes. Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
Hello, this is a well written acrostic and entry for the Valentine's poetry contest. Love can certainly bite sometimes. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments and of course the contest wishes.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
There is a scene in my book The West when the Traveler shares off his beard. His wife tells him to grow it back. He's too ugly to be seen without it. When she laughs he knows she's teasing.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
There is a scene in my book The West when the Traveler shares off his beard. His wife tells him to grow it back. He's too ugly to be seen without it. When she laughs he knows she's teasing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Vengeance is a wrath scorned
Everyone should be warned
Bites from Cupid's arrow sting
So true. Nothing more painful than to have your heart broken by one you love... to be told he/she does not love you anymore. Vengeance is so wrong, tho. People cannot help how they feel. If feelings change, deal with it and move on.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
Vengeance is a wrath scorned
Everyone should be warned
Bites from Cupid's arrow sting
So true. Nothing more painful than to have your heart broken by one you love... to be told he/she does not love you anymore. Vengeance is so wrong, tho. People cannot help how they feel. If feelings change, deal with it and move on.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing this Phyllis, I really appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cute Acrostic and ideal for Valentines and I wish you luck with it, love certainly can bite and it is sweet and heavenly too, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This is a cute Acrostic and ideal for Valentines and I wish you luck with it, love certainly can bite and it is sweet and heavenly too, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
This Valentines acrostic poem, What Is Love, presented with the vertical theme of LOVEBUGS, seems to find the push and pull of romance and relationship as it survives. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This Valentines acrostic poem, What Is Love, presented with the vertical theme of LOVEBUGS, seems to find the push and pull of romance and relationship as it survives. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate your kind comments and observations.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very good, a lovely acrostic.
Just one suggestion:
On the final line, I think 'be' should have been 'been'.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
Very good, a lovely acrostic.
Just one suggestion:
On the final line, I think 'be' should have been 'been'.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and of course the good luck wishes. I will make that change in a few minutes. Again thanks.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Bites from Cupid's arrow sting
Unless they make one's heart sing
Giggles and laughter are profound
Suggesting love has indeed be found ' A great valentine entry and I loved the quirky picture. Well done and good luck in the competition kindest regards and best wishes Meia x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
Bites from Cupid's arrow sting
Unless they make one's heart sing
Giggles and laughter are profound
Suggesting love has indeed be found ' A great valentine entry and I loved the quirky picture. Well done and good luck in the competition kindest regards and best wishes Meia x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and of course the good luck wishes. I will make that change in a few minutes. Again thanks.