Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I like best the second stanza of this poem, "For in the valley deep and cold, the ground will rise to meet, the mountain with its towering peak, to hope's majestic seat." What an excellent write, well done.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks, for your excellent review and empathetic comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Royowen, I enjoyed reading your poem. The verses are filled with vivid imagery. I especially liked:

And through the striking morning light,
the dew light sparks the day
to harmonies of dawn's bright song,
morn's cradle starts to sway.

(Beautifully stated. Good vocabulary usage.)

Silky rhyming. A poem of hope. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks, for your brilliant review and great comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

So written on time's daily flight,
lurk souls of life unique.
God's gifted to the sons of men --
the depths of life's mystique.'
Well you are definately becoming one of my very favourite poets Roy. Not because of your ranking (I have stopped attempting to keep up!) but because your writing is so very beautiful. Well done kindest and warmest regards and God bless you love Meia x

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

I didn't post much last year dear Meia, but I still wrote a lot, these are from then, I felt I needed a break last year. But this year God has rejuvenated me. I've never posted at this rate before. Thank you for your continued,, and much valued support, blessings, Roy

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Beautiful poem friend, Roy. Your metre and rhymes sublime and paired up with a gorgeous picture. So true the sun shines all the time.

Thank you for sharing thoughts from your quill. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks Gloria, for your excellent review and empathetic comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Wonderful poem, Roy. Never give up because there is always hope. If the stars can shine in a black sky, you can shine is the darkest of times. God would not make it otherwise. Have faith He will light your way. :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks Phyllis, for your excellent review and empathetic comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Roy, beautiful artwork and poem of the beauty all around us. You've described it well. The scriptures always sum it up wonderfully.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Well done Mel great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy

reply by MelB on 08-Feb-2018

Blessings to you, Roy:)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

How come everybody goes on about mountains, cold rocky things. The sheltered valley is where the crops grow...just rambling, Roy. Excellent faith poem.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks Red, for sharing and the great review, thanks mate, blessings, Roy

Comment from Cycler

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem - like that it has some basis in scripture. The picture is very good - shedding light all over the screen as I read your poem. Quite melodious, too. It feels like a very nice morning song.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks, for this super review and great comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

I think your words are a beautiful description of the dawning of a new day and a fine testament to your faith in the Lord. Your poem is well written, reads well.
Evi

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks,Evi, for your super review and your brilliant comments and stars,, and blessings, Roy

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

An amazing picture to accompany this poem about the steadfast love and faithfulness of the Lord. Lovely abcb rhyme in this beautiful piece. I love the title.

Very nicely done my friend.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks Janet, for your excellent review and empathetic comments, blessings, Roy