Melvin and Princess
beauty demands diamonds10 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Melvin and Princess as well written rich and seem as well as energy flow dwell Redbone the grammar issues as well this was written by mermaids or Elaine a great objective and subjective contents in place script to measure the line perfectly thanks for just never blessed day talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Melvin and Princess as well written rich and seem as well as energy flow dwell Redbone the grammar issues as well this was written by mermaids or Elaine a great objective and subjective contents in place script to measure the line perfectly thanks for just never blessed day talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Sherman541
Great story! Do you think if I paid Melvin a modest fee of salmon and trout he would pick me up an diamond and emerald necklace too? :) I love pets they are the best and they each have their own special personality. I love to make them talk, they say the smartest, darnedest, funniest or persnickety things :) Sherman541
PS: we are all owned by our pets, you re not alone :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Great story! Do you think if I paid Melvin a modest fee of salmon and trout he would pick me up an diamond and emerald necklace too? :) I love pets they are the best and they each have their own special personality. I love to make them talk, they say the smartest, darnedest, funniest or persnickety things :) Sherman541
PS: we are all owned by our pets, you re not alone :)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Love your review. Glad you enjoyed entering the world of Melvin and Princess. Thanks so much for a thoughtful review. Elaine
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You are most welcome - I am glad that you enjoyed the review, as much as I enjoyed the poem :) Though when it gets late, I see I should double check what I write :) lol but true
Comment from Megan14
A very cute story. I think you could have added more though. I do agree, cats in general have a way with people. They own you for sure!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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A very cute story. I think you could have added more though. I do agree, cats in general have a way with people. They own you for sure!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute write for the Animal Crackers club. You used such cute dialogue and lovely picture of the two cats. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I saw no errors! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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This is a very cute write for the Animal Crackers club. You used such cute dialogue and lovely picture of the two cats. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I saw no errors! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Of all the rescues I have had, I was owned by one Persian and you truly have captured the thought and actions of these precious felines
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Of all the rescues I have had, I was owned by one Persian and you truly have captured the thought and actions of these precious felines
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Kathy Allmon
I admit Im not a cat fan. But this was so cute and funny at the same time. You can tell you love them. I cant wait to read more of your writing. If you havent you should write more about these two.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I admit Im not a cat fan. But this was so cute and funny at the same time. You can tell you love them. I cant wait to read more of your writing. If you havent you should write more about these two.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I plan on writing more about these two Persian characters. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fantastic fantasy fiction, fabulous fashion, feline family, flavoured fund for fashion with diamonds, at home Melvin places the diamond necklace and joins Princess in a dinner; well said, well done; keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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This is a fantastic fantasy fiction, fabulous fashion, feline family, flavoured fund for fashion with diamonds, at home Melvin places the diamond necklace and joins Princess in a dinner; well said, well done; keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Ella Gott
This is so cute! I wish everyone had a chance to read this little gem, keep posting, I will definitely keep reading! Please when you have the chance, look over some of my work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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This is so cute! I wish everyone had a chance to read this little gem, keep posting, I will definitely keep reading! Please when you have the chance, look over some of my work.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Yes, I will look over your work. Thanks for your thoughtful review.
Comment from judiverse
These cats are so bad! Putting the necklace on the human's credit card is really low, but it's all in the name of love, I suppose. Princess is so vain. Nothing is good enough for her. Persians are beautiful cats, so maybe it's in their nature to be vain. I like the way you brought out the characteristics of both cats. Princess lives up to her name. Most of the story is in present tense. Third paragraph is in past, so you might want to change that to be consistent with the rest of the story. judi
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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These cats are so bad! Putting the necklace on the human's credit card is really low, but it's all in the name of love, I suppose. Princess is so vain. Nothing is good enough for her. Persians are beautiful cats, so maybe it's in their nature to be vain. I like the way you brought out the characteristics of both cats. Princess lives up to her name. Most of the story is in present tense. Third paragraph is in past, so you might want to change that to be consistent with the rest of the story. judi
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reminding me about the verb tenses, I always forget to be consistent with them. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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You're very welcome. Hope we haven't seen the last of these Persians. judi
Comment from Sasha
I agree, Persian cats do seem to project an air of elegance. I got a real kick out of this. I love cats and am in the process of writing about Nacho's cat, Santi. To him, she is more than just a cat.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I agree, Persian cats do seem to project an air of elegance. I got a real kick out of this. I love cats and am in the process of writing about Nacho's cat, Santi. To him, she is more than just a cat.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Oh... all of my cats are much more than cats, more like gods and goddesses. I am looking forward to reading about Nacho's cat. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
