Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This poem has a chilling theme, a mystical and maleficent words that seem to resonate deep and leave you with nightmares for dreams! He he he, great write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the fun time around the campfire with the family and especially the story teller amazes everyone for hours with stories of old times and sometimes about a ghost or two.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a well thought and expressed free verse with free flow of thoughts, excellent imagery and soft narrative taletelling with philosophical viewpoint about the frightniight; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done. Yes I love the conglomerate of of words, all deeply expressive, giving the impression of flawed humanity, oozing and ebbing, thrashing, gesticulating. All in this fine free verse work, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the awesome review, Roy.

reply by royowen on 08-Feb-2018

Most welcome

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Fanstorian Dean Kuch would be proud of your Horror/Thriller free verse! You had me at the edge of my seat, and of course, I admired your use of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks,Joan

Every once in a while i like to try the horror just dont care to explore the chop em up graphics.

Comment from bmethner

Excellent

Beautifully intense poem. The careful use of alliteration sounded out the dance of the devil as it lured the reader into the tale. I especially loved the "porous soil" line that allowed a grave (no pun intended) imprint on the soul. Very creative. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the awesome review. Appreciate the detail.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Chilly reading just before I log off for the night. Maybe I should have stuck with just the marshmallows. Now I will be hearing raven heels clicking all night. Best wishes with your entry.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Haha. Thanks for the kind review

Comment from Ella Gott

Excellent

Amazing! Keep writing like this and posting! I will keep a sharp lookout for more posts from you! I would be very honored if you critiqued my latest poem "In my Blissful World".

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Thank you. Just left you a review.

Comment from Dan Diego

Excellent

This poem strikes me as how campfire storytelling can terrorize children. They might sit down and enjoy the warmth and camaraderie, but the storyteller casts doubt and their souls are left to figure out on their own whether they will survive the night or story. That's probably why so many adults remember campfire stories from their childhood.

I am still shaken by the one where the couple drives quickly away from a scary evening on Lover's Lane only to find a hatchet lodged in the trunk of their car.

Great job. Of course, I could have missed the whole point. Yet, it did serve to make me think. Nice art, great title, wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks for the great review.