Although the fields...
Timeless treasure.61 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is absolutely lovely Roy. The words are gorgeous, the rhyme, of course, is perfect and the whole display with the great picture makes for a lovely read. I was hooked in from your first two lines. Lovely piece. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This is absolutely lovely Roy. The words are gorgeous, the rhyme, of course, is perfect and the whole display with the great picture makes for a lovely read. I was hooked in from your first two lines. Lovely piece. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Dear Dorothy,, for your most upbeat review and outs tangly encouraging comments, and the wonderful stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are a wizard with those rhyming words and flow Roy, your poem is such a joy and your message hits home too, such silky lines like honey, you have a great talent, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
You are a wizard with those rhyming words and flow Roy, your poem is such a joy and your message hits home too, such silky lines like honey, you have a great talent, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Coming from one as gifted as you are Dolly, I am so grateful for your approval, thank you, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dutchie
This poem is so wonderful Roy.... Nice flow and great rhyme.
Though we have many setbacks in our life, We have to keep Faith and Trust.
God in on our side, with His help we don't have to be afraid. We only need hope and patience... Fia
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This poem is so wonderful Roy.... Nice flow and great rhyme.
Though we have many setbacks in our life, We have to keep Faith and Trust.
God in on our side, with His help we don't have to be afraid. We only need hope and patience... Fia
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Fia, for your approving review and most uplifting comments, I am grateful dear girl, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written uplifting poem. Even when life seems at its darkest and we don't know what to do or where to go. We can just trust the Lord and know that He will provide in our needs.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
A very well-written uplifting poem. Even when life seems at its darkest and we don't know what to do or where to go. We can just trust the Lord and know that He will provide in our needs.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Sandra, for your sparking review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Pantygynt
to my mind this is a real "faith" poem echoing the faith described in the quoted biblical text in your notes. The third stanza in particular tells of the rewards coming to the faithful withought any hint of unctious overstatement.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
to my mind this is a real "faith" poem echoing the faith described in the quoted biblical text in your notes. The third stanza in particular tells of the rewards coming to the faithful withought any hint of unctious overstatement.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Jim, for your sparking review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Zue65
Yes, I agree our love and faith in God should have no bounds . It should be strong in both in times of harvest and drought. I like the message and the point you are driving home to the readers. Thanks for sharing another Godly theme to us. All the best.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Yes, I agree our love and faith in God should have no bounds . It should be strong in both in times of harvest and drought. I like the message and the point you are driving home to the readers. Thanks for sharing another Godly theme to us. All the best.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks, for your super review and wondefrful comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very beautiful and well written poem that is so very true. You used a great scripture in your notes and great words and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I saw no errors! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Roy, This is a very beautiful and well written poem that is so very true. You used a great scripture in your notes and great words and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I saw no errors! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Teri,, for your sparking review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy
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you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This has to have a six, for many reasons. First for content, and the use of the verse to strengthen it. Then for the spot on flow that makes the journey a joy to read. The rhyme of AABB is smooth and easy to read. I love it
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This has to have a six, for many reasons. First for content, and the use of the verse to strengthen it. Then for the spot on flow that makes the journey a joy to read. The rhyme of AABB is smooth and easy to read. I love it
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Barb, for your super observational review and most uplifting comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dean Kuch
Excellent poetry, Master of Terror, although one could hardly classify this as being terrifying in any way. Inspirational, perhaps, but far from terrifying, heh-heh.
Perfect iambic tetrameter all throughout. Sin-sational rhyming...
Nice work, as always.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Excellent poetry, Master of Terror, although one could hardly classify this as being terrifying in any way. Inspirational, perhaps, but far from terrifying, heh-heh.
Perfect iambic tetrameter all throughout. Sin-sational rhyming...
Nice work, as always.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Dean, to write terror my imagination would take a quantum leap. People are asking me, hah hah, you'll have to come back and post in my name,, excellent review, blessings, Roy
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Hahaha, will do, Roy.
Blessings,
~Dean :)
Comment from R56Ma3
The description is quite beautiful and amazing. God's creation is just simply awesome and His promises hold true. You shared an inspiring poem in which I simply love reading. R56ma3
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
The description is quite beautiful and amazing. God's creation is just simply awesome and His promises hold true. You shared an inspiring poem in which I simply love reading. R56ma3
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks Kerry, for your sparking review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy
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Your welcome