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haiku (the orange day fades)

5-7-5 haiku for contest

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, The Orange Day Fades, with its seventeen syllables, pictures the burnt orange day, spent and still, as all stops and fades. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my haiku.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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What a beautiful haiku. I love the photo with the sunset hanging over the city.The orange is fading as it should (that's the part of the poem that I like). And then sleep. How calming. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks orange day fades at the sunset skies and darkens the horizon and the world goes slow and sleeps thereafter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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    I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written and beautiful haiku about the beautiful sunset. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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    I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your poem has painted a picture of a sunset slowly descending leaving us in darkness, full of colour and atmospherics, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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    I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Sunset Haiku writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you