Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

I appreciate your ability to tell the story of yourself and your relationship in just three lines. The last line is a zinger. Good luck with the contest! Caroline

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks so much!!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Senryu Yourself writing prompt.
Well said and your point is well made.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thank you.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

An excellent tribute Senryu to the art of nagging. A familiar refrain and the bane of nearly every husband. The art work is perfect. the verse is perfect and to the point.

Well done,

Eugene

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thank you!!

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

This one really does raise a hearty chuckle - who can argue with this situation repeated in homesteads across the entire land - well done for portraying the moment

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks so Much!

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This is really well-written! I love the irony in this, when your spouse says you never pay attention, but you weren't paying attention to her when she said that either. Great job, and good luck with the contest!

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot for your good review.