Perennials of War
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Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the post. I review a lot of talented poets and writers like you, which is the reason I' already out of sixes on this early Monday morning. Love the banter between your characters (you can tell they rely on one another quite a bit). Nice love twist between Anderson and Shana. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the post. I review a lot of talented poets and writers like you, which is the reason I' already out of sixes on this early Monday morning. Love the banter between your characters (you can tell they rely on one another quite a bit). Nice love twist between Anderson and Shana. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review and don't worry about the sixes.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I can see that the romance between Shana Anderson is moving along
What got my attention is (which I believe is a new character (Mary) in this chapter
Question we will met soon,
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Hello Barb
I can see that the romance between Shana Anderson is moving along
What got my attention is (which I believe is a new character (Mary) in this chapter
Question we will met soon,
Gert
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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She Mary is just a fleeting pass. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
I just wonder why you motioned ( Mary?)
Gert
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I felt Hannah wouldn't go to Boston by herself, so I felt it became more real.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a Jewish issue, matter, dexterity would only never solve the case, question of love in between, Shana is not so easy; now the story ends with a curious consequence; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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This speaks a Jewish issue, matter, dexterity would only never solve the case, question of love in between, Shana is not so easy; now the story ends with a curious consequence; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Lakieshae
WOW! I'm loving what I've read here.... needing the full book now cause I'm ready to read the story of what happens next and what happened before this,
Now this is how a book flow. And make you want more, I've heard about this type of feeling of wanting the reader to want more of your work.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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WOW! I'm loving what I've read here.... needing the full book now cause I'm ready to read the story of what happens next and what happened before this,
Now this is how a book flow. And make you want more, I've heard about this type of feeling of wanting the reader to want more of your work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Zue65
Well, i am really beginning to enjoy this, the budding romance between Shana and Andrew. I have to admit, I am great sucker for romance and this post promises to be one that will satisfy my cravings for such story plot. Thanks for sharing an excellent write
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Well, i am really beginning to enjoy this, the budding romance between Shana and Andrew. I have to admit, I am great sucker for romance and this post promises to be one that will satisfy my cravings for such story plot. Thanks for sharing an excellent write
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent chapter. Shana needs to stop worrying about what her father is going to think. She's a very capable person and can make decisions for herself. Anderson has been very careful not to cross the line, and Shana was grateful for staying with her after she screamed in her nightmares. Having money means you can pull a lot of strings, as Anderson does for Shana's family. Probably feeling so close to her is what's behind all the help he's given. At least Anderson and Shana's father are on good enough terms to discuss the challenges of a Jewish-Gentile marriage. Characterizations are wonderful. judi
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Excellent chapter. Shana needs to stop worrying about what her father is going to think. She's a very capable person and can make decisions for herself. Anderson has been very careful not to cross the line, and Shana was grateful for staying with her after she screamed in her nightmares. Having money means you can pull a lot of strings, as Anderson does for Shana's family. Probably feeling so close to her is what's behind all the help he's given. At least Anderson and Shana's father are on good enough terms to discuss the challenges of a Jewish-Gentile marriage. Characterizations are wonderful. judi
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Sankey
This was a super top chapter. I guess I always feel like you give adequate information seeing as a born again believer in Christ I have understood many of the different religions and their beliefs. So pleased we are finally getting across to the closeness of "Drew" and Shana. I know this will be a best seller. Tell me where your autobiography is please.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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This was a super top chapter. I guess I always feel like you give adequate information seeing as a born again believer in Christ I have understood many of the different religions and their beliefs. So pleased we are finally getting across to the closeness of "Drew" and Shana. I know this will be a best seller. Tell me where your autobiography is please.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You are always going to get differences of opinion. But never forget they are just that, opinions, and everyone has one. I gave up trying to make everyone happy a long time ago, because it just isn't possible. Write the way you want something to read, saying what you want it to say. Only you can know what you want to say. I think most people mean well, but of course, there are always a few who just like to nitpick. Always trust your own judgement. Thanks for another great chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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You are always going to get differences of opinion. But never forget they are just that, opinions, and everyone has one. I gave up trying to make everyone happy a long time ago, because it just isn't possible. Write the way you want something to read, saying what you want it to say. Only you can know what you want to say. I think most people mean well, but of course, there are always a few who just like to nitpick. Always trust your own judgement. Thanks for another great chapter. :-)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
A little headway is better than none at all. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Error.
"I've haven't seen the stubborn side of Shana. Omit the contraction.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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A little headway is better than none at all. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Error.
"I've haven't seen the stubborn side of Shana. Omit the contraction.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I have already made the correction. Probably doing it while you were reading.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from royowen
After spending all night watching over Shana, then breakfast, Drew talks with Paul, after Hannah and Shana go off together, and Anderson asks Paul how he "snared" Hannah, just saying Hannah's love was stronger than her "Jewishness" but Shana was ten times more stubborn, well done Barbara, blessjngs, Roy
Typo : I('ve) haven't seen the stubborn side of Shana.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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After spending all night watching over Shana, then breakfast, Drew talks with Paul, after Hannah and Shana go off together, and Anderson asks Paul how he "snared" Hannah, just saying Hannah's love was stronger than her "Jewishness" but Shana was ten times more stubborn, well done Barbara, blessjngs, Roy
Typo : I('ve) haven't seen the stubborn side of Shana.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the catch and I'm off to fix it.
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My pleasure Barbara
