Enduring Love
In memory of my recently deceased wife85 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. True love is a love that never stops, even when we are disappointed by the ones we love, we keep loving them from reality to beyond the grave.
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A very well-written love poem. True love is a love that never stops, even when we are disappointed by the ones we love, we keep loving them from reality to beyond the grave.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a tribute to your deceased wife, you remember how she made love so gracious, real, meaningful and made her dearest, loveliest and most beautiful; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks a tribute to your deceased wife, you remember how she made love so gracious, real, meaningful and made her dearest, loveliest and most beautiful; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
First and foremost, Jay, I am very sorrowed to learn about your loss.
You well composed Shakespearean sonnet is not only a lovely ode to her memory but very well rhymed, metered and written as well.
It's easy to tell when something was written from the heart or merely written to "keep up" in the rankings.
IMHO, this one definitely came from the heart.
God bless,
~Dean
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First and foremost, Jay, I am very sorrowed to learn about your loss.
You well composed Shakespearean sonnet is not only a lovely ode to her memory but very well rhymed, metered and written as well.
It's easy to tell when something was written from the heart or merely written to "keep up" in the rankings.
IMHO, this one definitely came from the heart.
God bless,
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from ameen786
Bravo! A beautiful tribute in lovely verses in simple down to earth vocabulary and so rich in its meaning; excellent rhyming; thanks for sharing.
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Bravo! A beautiful tribute in lovely verses in simple down to earth vocabulary and so rich in its meaning; excellent rhyming; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you, Jay, for sharing your beautiful tribute to your wife. It's always such a beautiful thing to witness a lifelong love in marriage. Thank you for sharing these your precious memories.
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Thank you, Jay, for sharing your beautiful tribute to your wife. It's always such a beautiful thing to witness a lifelong love in marriage. Thank you for sharing these your precious memories.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from Joy Graham
It's nice to meet a fellow sonnet lover and rhyme lover :) I'm not so great at sonnets, though I have vowed to write them lots this year and see if I can improve with them.
I enjoyed this tribute to your wife's memory. I'm sorry she is no longer with you. I find writing is my therapy, and when I lost my dad and brother it took me a while to be able to write about them or to them. Now I'm finding it gives me peace.
Your sonnet was practically perfect, except I had trouble with line nine. The meter seems off to me. Otherwise you have nice iambic pentameter, nice rhymes, and nice closing couplet.
Sincerely Joy xx
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It's nice to meet a fellow sonnet lover and rhyme lover :) I'm not so great at sonnets, though I have vowed to write them lots this year and see if I can improve with them.
I enjoyed this tribute to your wife's memory. I'm sorry she is no longer with you. I find writing is my therapy, and when I lost my dad and brother it took me a while to be able to write about them or to them. Now I'm finding it gives me peace.
Your sonnet was practically perfect, except I had trouble with line nine. The meter seems off to me. Otherwise you have nice iambic pentameter, nice rhymes, and nice closing couplet.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from Bucketlist
HI JAYBIRD! THISI IS A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO YOUR LATE WIFE AND MARRIAGE.
MOST PEOPLE DONT HAVE THAT EVERLASTING HAPPINESS . SHE LIVES ON IN SPIRIT AND YOUR HEART's MEMORY. I LOVE AND ADMIRE YOUR PENNING.
MAY YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE FOR A LONG TIME
HUGS! TRISHA
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HI JAYBIRD! THISI IS A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO YOUR LATE WIFE AND MARRIAGE.
MOST PEOPLE DONT HAVE THAT EVERLASTING HAPPINESS . SHE LIVES ON IN SPIRIT AND YOUR HEART's MEMORY. I LOVE AND ADMIRE YOUR PENNING.
MAY YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE FOR A LONG TIME
HUGS! TRISHA
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from Zue65
This is a heartfelt poem dedicated to a departed beloved Every line speaks of your devotion and love for your deceased wife. The rhymes are smooth and not forced Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
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This is a heartfelt poem dedicated to a departed beloved Every line speaks of your devotion and love for your deceased wife. The rhymes are smooth and not forced Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from MelB
Hi Jaybird, this is a beautiful and heartfelt poem you've written. So hard to lose a loved one, especially a spouse you've spent so much time with. So sorry for your loss!
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Hi Jaybird, this is a beautiful and heartfelt poem you've written. So hard to lose a loved one, especially a spouse you've spent so much time with. So sorry for your loss!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
What a beautiful and poignant tribute to your recently deceased wife. My husband and I have been married for nearly thirty-nine years, and I cannot begin to contemplate what my life would be like if he were gone. As you write, your spouse with "remain in precious memory" - and that can never be taken away from you...
Best Wishes,
diane
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Hello!
What a beautiful and poignant tribute to your recently deceased wife. My husband and I have been married for nearly thirty-nine years, and I cannot begin to contemplate what my life would be like if he were gone. As you write, your spouse with "remain in precious memory" - and that can never be taken away from you...
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
