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Enduring Love

In memory of my recently deceased wife

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Enduring Love
by jaybird1

Hello my friend

Beautiful poem about the love you feel for your wife. I'm sorry for your loss. It's very hard to loose someone you love, I know. Take care of yourself.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Jaybird. This is a wonderful tribute written to your wife. The sonnet is well written and the words are sensitive and meaningful. The message is wonderful.

Robert

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Rhymer
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Hi Jaybird you strike many a familiar, loving note within me with your words. I fortunately, still enjoy the precious relationship of my loving wife Pauline, but wonder how much longer we will be allowed to enjoy the company of one another, for age does begin to take its toll. Never a day goes by without we repeat our vows, in some form or another, said those many years ago. Even today, when we sit watching a movie or simply sitting and reminiscing on folks and times gone by, we hold hands and say nothing, it speaks volumes, regarding our relationship that was truly made in heaven. We have little time for the modern generation and their, here today gone tomorrow attitude. Ones who know little or nothing of true Love and the vows we made in a church. Many a night before we go to sleep, we repeat those same vows, with the same sincerity as when they were first made, 65 years ago. Through thick and thin, we've never once regretted what we pledged back then. Never go to sleep angry or with our nose out of joint! I can feel your pain and my heart goes out to you, for your loss. Fate can be, and often is, most unkind. Don't ever lose those precious memories of one who meant so much to you. Fondest regards, Pauline and Denis.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Janetsue
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I am so sorry for your loss. I gather that you were married for many years. Enduring love is a beautiful thing. You have shared your deep feelings very well in this excellent rhyming poetry. I'm glad you are able to write about such a sorrowful event because it is helpful in being able to endure in the aftermath.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from jenintorre
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This is a very touching and well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. You certainly have many very precious memories of your wife. Take care. Jen.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Sally Law
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You two are are just the sweetest. I can imagine you both in my mind; a slightly older version of my husband and I. Something to aspire to for us all.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
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A beautiful tribute to your late wife. It was express lovingly and with great emotion. One could feel the love your once shared and the love that is still remembered by.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This is truly lovely, Jaybird. A wonderful tribute to the one you love. It is so hard to lose your soul mate. To be left alone with only memories, but we can thank God we have them. Well done my friend. God Bless you. Be safe. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Martie Zuckerman
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I found this very well written and very heart warming. My condolences on your loss. You certainly did a wonderful job expressing your great love for her with your words.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem full of great descriptive and loving words about and for your deceased wife. You used great words and great imagery from your words. I am so sorry for your loss my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018