Enduring Love
In memory of my recently deceased wife85 total reviews
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Very well written "Tribute" of truth. You did build within your heart a Shrine, I can feel it. I suppose we all have lost a very loved one, we sit and wonder why? The difference here, you put it to words. Thanks. Best wishes.
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Very well written "Tribute" of truth. You did build within your heart a Shrine, I can feel it. I suppose we all have lost a very loved one, we sit and wonder why? The difference here, you put it to words. Thanks. Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Flowers of love were blooming when we met
and soon you would become my precious bride.
If life is dear, this was the dearest yet.", because I could visualize the first two lines and because the last line I pointed out showed your gratitude for her!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Matthew 5:4 New International Version (NIV)
4 Blessed are those who mourn,
for they will be comforted.
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My favorite part was, "Flowers of love were blooming when we met
and soon you would become my precious bride.
If life is dear, this was the dearest yet.", because I could visualize the first two lines and because the last line I pointed out showed your gratitude for her!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Matthew 5:4 New International Version (NIV)
4 Blessed are those who mourn,
for they will be comforted.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from RShipp
"while stars above add romance, through the night." ... and "Flowers of love were blooming when we met" Both of these liens are such vivid pictures of your passion.
Enjoyed the reading of your poem.
Blessings to you.
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"while stars above add romance, through the night." ... and "Flowers of love were blooming when we met" Both of these liens are such vivid pictures of your passion.
Enjoyed the reading of your poem.
Blessings to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great and sweet tribute to your late wife. Your words flow from your heart and paint a picture of true love that you had for each other. I liked the rhymes and the smooth flow and the great message of love everlasting. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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This is a great and sweet tribute to your late wife. Your words flow from your heart and paint a picture of true love that you had for each other. I liked the rhymes and the smooth flow and the great message of love everlasting. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely tribute; well done in excellent rhythm and rhyme. I trust you'll be sharing this with the family. I like the line: if paradise exists it must be this. Cheers. LIZ
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Lovely tribute; well done in excellent rhythm and rhyme. I trust you'll be sharing this with the family. I like the line: if paradise exists it must be this. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Lance S. Loria
An amazing poem describing a perfect love that continues to endure. You are a lucky man. Keep those memories alive and kicking. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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An amazing poem describing a perfect love that continues to endure. You are a lucky man. Keep those memories alive and kicking. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Grillin0920
Calls upon the presence of heaven and colors it with the blooming flowers of when you met.
If life is dear, this was the dearest yet. Strong and heartfelt.
One lucky lady.
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Calls upon the presence of heaven and colors it with the blooming flowers of when you met.
If life is dear, this was the dearest yet. Strong and heartfelt.
One lucky lady.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Kathleen S.
Your poetry is indeed beautiful and wonderful to read. I think it's a great tribute to your wife and the life, that you spent with her. Thank you for sharing it with your readers.
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Your poetry is indeed beautiful and wonderful to read. I think it's a great tribute to your wife and the life, that you spent with her. Thank you for sharing it with your readers.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Mastery
Hi Jay. This is a lovely poem and I am glad I caught it this time around for sure. This stanza in particular caught my fancy:
"All dreams, all pleasures, all desires unite,
unite within this wondrous vale of bliss
while stars above add romance, through the night.
If paradise exists, it must be this."
less you my talented friend. :) Bob
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Hi Jay. This is a lovely poem and I am glad I caught it this time around for sure. This stanza in particular caught my fancy:
"All dreams, all pleasures, all desires unite,
unite within this wondrous vale of bliss
while stars above add romance, through the night.
If paradise exists, it must be this."
less you my talented friend. :) Bob
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Jaybird1,
MARVELOUS piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its heart touching theme.
The last two lines are particularly noteworthy.
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Hello Jaybird1,
MARVELOUS piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its heart touching theme.
The last two lines are particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
