Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'Assassinate Me A Thriller' writing prompt.
Well written, your story is clear.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Thank you for sharing my story and commenting, Sharon.

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

Ohh!... This is a good one!... If I ever feel the need for a 'Hitman'...
I'll know where to go!... This is a well written piece...
Didn't come across any 'glitches'...
My compliments on a very good story!

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

I am delighted you enjoyed my short-short. Thank you so much for sharing and commenting.

reply by Wetbelly01 on 03-Feb-2018

You're Very Welcome!