What a Beautiful Day
the dandelions remind me of Brooke66 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
Ahhhhh, this is lovely :) I need to close my eyes and dream of being there instead of here where it's snowing and freezing cold. Brrrrr. Today will be another jammy day for me curled up in bed with a good book.
I love the moving picture you have. Oh yes, Brooke loves her dandelions. I can hear that little birdie tweeting.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Ahhhhh, this is lovely :) I need to close my eyes and dream of being there instead of here where it's snowing and freezing cold. Brrrrr. Today will be another jammy day for me curled up in bed with a good book.
I love the moving picture you have. Oh yes, Brooke loves her dandelions. I can hear that little birdie tweeting.
Joy xx
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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HI Joy, I love curling up on a cold day on the couch...with a hot cup of chocolate...burrrr...yes Brooke did love her dandelions...I would always tease her about them being weeds...and she would come out with a new poem making them Roses..I miss her...sigh...and I love this picture as will...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...love Linda xxoo
Comment from jppoet
This is such a glorious poem, so loving and appreciative of God's gifts to all of us. The photo also contributes affinity to your sweet poem.
I find it in sympathy with my poem "VALENTINE'S DAY" now entered in the VALENTINE POETRY contest ending soon. Long time FS members say its TRIPLICATE ACROSTIC has never ever been seen on FS. Pls take a Review-peek. I will become your Fan. Blessings. john
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is such a glorious poem, so loving and appreciative of God's gifts to all of us. The photo also contributes affinity to your sweet poem.
I find it in sympathy with my poem "VALENTINE'S DAY" now entered in the VALENTINE POETRY contest ending soon. Long time FS members say its TRIPLICATE ACROSTIC has never ever been seen on FS. Pls take a Review-peek. I will become your Fan. Blessings. john
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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HI John, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love this picture as well...thank you so very much...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem my friend about the beautiful day the Lord has made and you are enjoying it. You used such great wording and lovely art work! love, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem my friend about the beautiful day the Lord has made and you are enjoying it. You used such great wording and lovely art work! love, Teri
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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HI Teri, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...and I am looking forward to spring this year...thank you...love you much...Linda xxoo
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Spring is a beautiful and warm time! love you my friend!
Comment from MattieV
Hi poet,
I think most of us can relate to your poem.
God is everywhere. Spring is around the corner. I know it is many persons favorite season but I can't say I have a favorite. Each has its beauty.
My second review. Hope it was okay.
Mattie V
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Hi poet,
I think most of us can relate to your poem.
God is everywhere. Spring is around the corner. I know it is many persons favorite season but I can't say I have a favorite. Each has its beauty.
My second review. Hope it was okay.
Mattie V
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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HI Mattie, you are so right ...each has it on beauty...thank you so much for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your beautiful artwork is matched perfectly by your lovely poem.
Well written, well said. Very colorful.
Nicely done and thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Your beautiful artwork is matched perfectly by your lovely poem.
Well written, well said. Very colorful.
Nicely done and thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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HI Sharon, thank you so much for a wonderful review my friend...I love the picture as well...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
This is so beautiful. 'My mind rendered silent by God's creations,' and the last stanza says it all.
The entire poem is lovely, and so touching. You should have entered this in a contest. A sure winner.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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This is so beautiful. 'My mind rendered silent by God's creations,' and the last stanza says it all.
The entire poem is lovely, and so touching. You should have entered this in a contest. A sure winner.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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HI Yvonne, thank you so much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Cycler
So lovely, Linda. You've painted a precious picture of God and this world which He has allowed us to enjoy ... and remember. I am sure you've sat ar this window or one similar ... probably many times with the praise you've just said; and you remember; He gives us moments to remember and to pass on to others.
Thanks for this moment :-)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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So lovely, Linda. You've painted a precious picture of God and this world which He has allowed us to enjoy ... and remember. I am sure you've sat ar this window or one similar ... probably many times with the praise you've just said; and you remember; He gives us moments to remember and to pass on to others.
Thanks for this moment :-)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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HI Dave, how are you doing????....this poem was a longer one...I changed it more than once...didn't like the way I worded it...then I got it where I thought I liked it...and promoted it...well!!!...can you guess...LOL...LOL...I didn't like it...so it started getting later...and I took out what I didn't like...and this is what came of it...LOL...sigh...well there is always a next time...thank you Dave for allll your so lovely stars...and a wonderful review my sweet friend...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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Sometimes, less is better. What ever you did, I did not see it before your modifications. However, your pruning has very good results. That is actually Biblical - the concept of pruning until the Lord is able to use you for His glory. You jave a fine partner!
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yes I do...and if I know anything...I know he truly loves me...you made my day...thank you...love xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun and uplifting poem. The first signs of flowers remind us winter is nearly over and Spring is knocking at the door to invite us in to the refreshing air and warm sunshine.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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A very well-written fun and uplifting poem. The first signs of flowers remind us winter is nearly over and Spring is knocking at the door to invite us in to the refreshing air and warm sunshine.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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HI Sandra, I love winter...but am looking forward to spring this year...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...so glad you like it...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I wonder if Brooke will ever write her poetry again, she really is missed on here. This is a lovely poem, dear Linda, it made me smile to know you are. We do take God's gifts for granted and don't really stand and take in the beauty he has bestowed on us to share. Such a softly beautiful poem, my dear friend, with the perfect picture to admire. Big hugs, my lovely friend, love you lots. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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I wonder if Brooke will ever write her poetry again, she really is missed on here. This is a lovely poem, dear Linda, it made me smile to know you are. We do take God's gifts for granted and don't really stand and take in the beauty he has bestowed on us to share. Such a softly beautiful poem, my dear friend, with the perfect picture to admire. Big hugs, my lovely friend, love you lots. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Hi Sandra, this poem started out longer...but I wasn't happy with it...so I got it where I thought I liked it...and I promoted it...after reading it again...I didn't like it...LOL...LOL...so I made some more changes...and the night got later...so I decided...it is what it is....sigh...LOL...next time...LOL...I have so many half written ones...I think my muse took a long vacation...LOL...thank you so much my lovely friend for a wonderful review...love you the mosteat...biggest hugs all around...Linda xxoo How did Ian's foot turn out????...Did they do surgery???...xxoo Hi to him...xxoo
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I don't see any reason to change your poem, Linda, it is just lovely. :))
They are putting Ian's food and leg in a cast which will have to be cut off and changed every week. (the cast, not the foot and leg! :)) Ian told me that, lol) I love that man to bits, he is so brave and takes everything without fussing. I'll tell him you still ask after him, thank you, my dearest friend. Love you lots too! xxxxx
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that sounds painful...why are they putting food in his cast???...is this like a time capsual...LOL...LOL...love xxoo
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LOL!!!! FOOT! I got it right the second time, lol. I really must check what I right before I click on 'send' it won't show on spell check. You really made me laugh, lol! xxxxxx
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Oh!!! his FOOT...so glad I could make you laugh...xxoo
Comment from kiwisteveh
Some days, or moments in them, just seem perfect and your free verse poem has captured the feeling of joy and thankfulness of being alive at that moment.
Yes, dandelions will always remind us of Brooke. I used to tease her and even wrote a poem about slaying them with my ride-on mower...
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Some days, or moments in them, just seem perfect and your free verse poem has captured the feeling of joy and thankfulness of being alive at that moment.
Yes, dandelions will always remind us of Brooke. I used to tease her and even wrote a poem about slaying them with my ride-on mower...
Steve
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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HI Steve, yes they do...I use to tease Brooke about dandelions being weeds...she would post a poem that made them Roses...LOL...thank you so much for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
