Jack and the Beanstalk
Fairytales With A Twist Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Katie Solis
Haha. Poor Jack. I get that crack rhymes with back, but I think that one line with his mom in it, breaks up the flow of the poem. Overall the poem was cute and I enjoyed re-reading it.
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Haha. Poor Jack. I get that crack rhymes with back, but I think that one line with his mom in it, breaks up the flow of the poem. Overall the poem was cute and I enjoyed re-reading it.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write with a twist on the the fairy tale about Jack and the beanstalk, a reality check for Jack here in your short but fun-loving poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This is a fun write with a twist on the the fairy tale about Jack and the beanstalk, a reality check for Jack here in your short but fun-loving poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your much appreciated compliments, Dolly.
Comment from Wetbelly01
Yeah, I have to admit, I like your poem...
It's got a smooth rhythm and rhyme....
Didn't see any problems with it at all...
My compliments on a fine, funny piece...
Good Luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Yeah, I have to admit, I like your poem...
It's got a smooth rhythm and rhyme....
Didn't see any problems with it at all...
My compliments on a fine, funny piece...
Good Luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thanks for admitting your appreciation of my poem, Wetbelly, and your good wishes. I sincerely hope they come true!
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You're very welcome!
