Ninja Guinea Pigs
huh....17 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Cute piece. Guinea pigs are fun and easy to care for.
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My cage mate Yeti, is big and fluffy. <--Need two commas to set off a name.
My cage mate, Yeti, is big and fluffy. <--Correct
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Leonardo, the leader is my role model <--Need two commas to set off a descriptive phrase.
Leonardo, the leader, is my role model <--Correct
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Cute piece. Guinea pigs are fun and easy to care for.
_________
My cage mate Yeti, is big and fluffy. <--Need two commas to set off a name.
My cage mate, Yeti, is big and fluffy. <--Correct
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Leonardo, the leader is my role model <--Need two commas to set off a descriptive phrase.
Leonardo, the leader, is my role model <--Correct
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for pointing out about the commas, they are my weakest point. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from poetwatch
It's a good ninja guinea pigs story. I would like to make a suggestion though. While reading I stumbled on this lines, " Leonardo, the leader is my role model, Yeti must follow me." I believe it goes with the other paragraph. Otherwise it's a good read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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It's a good ninja guinea pigs story. I would like to make a suggestion though. While reading I stumbled on this lines, " Leonardo, the leader is my role model, Yeti must follow me." I believe it goes with the other paragraph. Otherwise it's a good read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how being skilled fighters, fair judge the fifth Ninja Turtle is, Tixie is a superhero; they are conscious of their role and justice to humans in their cages; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This speaks how being skilled fighters, fair judge the fifth Ninja Turtle is, Tixie is a superhero; they are conscious of their role and justice to humans in their cages; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Love your positive review, thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Dan Diego
I think I understand. They pop up in the air like popcorn when it pops. I've never seen that. I'm going to have to google that.
This is another fine post from the Animal Crackers club. And they all seem to follow a theme - that if animals could talk or think, this is what they would say. And your readers on FS are the true benefactors.
This is a well-written little story about the Guinea Pigs in your house. They seem to have quite the imagination when they write your stories for you. I was a dad in the 80's and 90's, so I know the TMNT's well. I did like how Trixie compared herself those iconic crime fighters. No errors. Great stuff coming out of that club.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I think I understand. They pop up in the air like popcorn when it pops. I've never seen that. I'm going to have to google that.
This is another fine post from the Animal Crackers club. And they all seem to follow a theme - that if animals could talk or think, this is what they would say. And your readers on FS are the true benefactors.
This is a well-written little story about the Guinea Pigs in your house. They seem to have quite the imagination when they write your stories for you. I was a dad in the 80's and 90's, so I know the TMNT's well. I did like how Trixie compared herself those iconic crime fighters. No errors. Great stuff coming out of that club.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I am in awe of your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mermaids,
This is a fun little story for the Animal Crackers club event. We took in a guinea pig when the kids were younger. It was their class pet, and all the kids took turns taking it home on weekends and holidays. I don't think I've ever seen a guinea pig jump straight up like popcorn. That sounds amazing. Maybe we didn't babysit the class guinea pig enough to see it happen? I'll be on the lookout at pet stores now lol!
Joy xx
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hello Mermaids,
This is a fun little story for the Animal Crackers club event. We took in a guinea pig when the kids were younger. It was their class pet, and all the kids took turns taking it home on weekends and holidays. I don't think I've ever seen a guinea pig jump straight up like popcorn. That sounds amazing. Maybe we didn't babysit the class guinea pig enough to see it happen? I'll be on the lookout at pet stores now lol!
Joy xx
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Guinea pigs are so interesting! I am always learning something new about them. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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Hi Elaine I can't write her or review anybody's work right now because of Tommy Enos he thinks I'm cutting and pasting from my reviews give him your comments to guys a piece of crap dr. Ricky 1024
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Sorry to hear that. Elaine
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute little story about your two Guienea pigs you and your husband have. I enjoyed reading it. They are really cute little animals to watch. I did not see any errors. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is a very cute little story about your two Guienea pigs you and your husband have. I enjoyed reading it. They are really cute little animals to watch. I did not see any errors. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I used to raise them and they are amazing critters. I loved the churbling they do when they sense my presence and know they will get treats. YOu did this very well
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I used to raise them and they are amazing critters. I loved the churbling they do when they sense my presence and know they will get treats. YOu did this very well
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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My husband and I are having sooooo much fun with these two guinea pigs. They have become a big part of our fur-family and bring us much joy. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi mermaids how much fun you made your poem about your two guinea pigs Yeti and Trixie wanting to join and have fun with the Ninja Turtles
You are very creative.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hi mermaids how much fun you made your poem about your two guinea pigs Yeti and Trixie wanting to join and have fun with the Ninja Turtles
You are very creative.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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You are welcome mermaids
Gert
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a cute submission for the Animal Crackers event.
Well written, a clear story. The picture is cute too.
Well done and thank you for sharing your fun, Ninja Turtle, piece.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This is a cute submission for the Animal Crackers event.
Well written, a clear story. The picture is cute too.
Well done and thank you for sharing your fun, Ninja Turtle, piece.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
