Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Ulla,
your writing is so impressive to read. You have chosen a time in history where people met some horrific deaths and the fear of being burnt to death is so overwhelming. The last few minutes of your life facing such a deed must be the most un-comprehendable situation that anyone could imagine. A brilliant write for just two lines, that filled me with dread and horror.
Sorry I have no sixes.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Wow, Brenda, thank you so much. How pleased I am and for your virtual six. I agree, it must have been a horrific death. All the best. Ulla:)xx

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Ulla, two sentences...and she's out of here...very well thought of my sweet friend...I would love to be a witch in todays time...boy there would be some changes...LOL...very well written sweet girl...and the perfect picture...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot.Linda. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)xx

reply by l.raven on 03-Feb-2018

you are so welcome my sweet friend...smiling back at ya...love xxoo

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Oh, what fun it must be to write these short horror pieces, Ulla. I think you did very well with your two sentences. They don't have to be long to be very effective, Giddy.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Hi Giddy, thanks a lot. It's good to hear from you. How are you doing? I do miss your writing but I suppose you're still busy editing? Yes, I had fun writing this, and I'm thrilled with the respond I've received.
I'm busy with my new home - not yet moved in though. I'm dismayed I'd just had an awful virus that's going around here. Lasted ten days, and now I feel all run down. Still determined to write though. Hugs. Ulla:)))

reply by Giddy Nielsen-Sweep on 03-Feb-2018

Oh, so sorry to hear you have been ill ,Ulla. Don't write if it adds to your troubles ? putting pressure on yourself won't help you recover. Take it from someone who's done a few foolish things like that! LOL. Extra hugs to help you recover, Giddy

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You did a good job on this one, my friend. You created clear imagery and a scary event in just 2 lines. I can see that scene in my mind. Well done

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Hi Douglas, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written two sentence horror story. It must be one of the mist horrific moments in our lives when we realize we will be killed in a brutal way in the next few moments.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, Sandra. All best, Ulla:)))

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-line horror story captures a chilling scene where a woman comes to the realization that she will be burned as a witch. As we can guess, she became a Charcoal. In line three though, she rises from the pyre as Cinder Jane and lays waste to the village.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

hahah, Bill. Your imagination running wild. I love it! thanks a lot for a great review. Ulla:))

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

"Hot(,) salty tears roll(ed) down..."

Ulla, other than that one, small glitch and the missing comma, this is exceptional! I have to say, you do remarkably well for someone whose first language isn't English - most impressive, my friend.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Awe, Dawn, thank you so much. You can't imagine what your words mean to me. I'm so pleased that all the hard work and great help from you all is paying off. I've made the corrections. Thanks again. Warm regards. Ulla:)))

reply by Dawn Munro on 01-Feb-2018

You're most welcome, Ulla!

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Terrific work with this one. I am convinced I would have bee considered a witch back then and heaven only knows what horrific ending I would have faced. Great work with this, I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot Sasha. I actually loved to write this for the challenge. It just came to me. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good one mate. Well done. Loved the artwork as well. I thought you were clever to tell a whole story in just a couple of sentences. Always enjoy your writing. Cheers.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot, Sankey, I'm so glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Paws4FX

Excellent

Dark! I love it. A lot of story in two sentences. I'm not sure the word interesting does the first sentence justice. You might set a more ominous tone with a more brooding descriptor. Only a suggestion, because it's a good story. Thank you!

Michael

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Hi Michael, thank you so much. I so appreciate your great review and suggestion. I've made a change using the word you just used yourself in the review. If you got time ,I would like to know what you think. All best. Ulla;))

reply by Paws4FX on 31-Jan-2018

I think that definitely sets a more appropriate tone!

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks so very much! Much appreciated.