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Comment from mermaids
I hope you have recovered from your surgeries. Excellent poem that shows feelings and emotions. Your words reflect how the pain you have experienced does not go away.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I hope you have recovered from your surgeries. Excellent poem that shows feelings and emotions. Your words reflect how the pain you have experienced does not go away.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thanks Elaine.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from frogbook
A powerful message of human suffering. Written straight from the heart I would say-a raw description of feelings and pain. Well done, and hopefully a small relief to write.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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A powerful message of human suffering. Written straight from the heart I would say-a raw description of feelings and pain. Well done, and hopefully a small relief to write.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from royowen
Well done Ricky, it's not the physical injuries that, although leaving scarring eventually gives a modicum of healing, but the other wounds, that takes to bed, and wake up to are more debilitating. Well written Ricky, good scribing dear man, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Well done Ricky, it's not the physical injuries that, although leaving scarring eventually gives a modicum of healing, but the other wounds, that takes to bed, and wake up to are more debilitating. Well written Ricky, good scribing dear man, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Roy.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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Well done Ricky
Comment from Dean Kuch
"It takes me forsakes me and then slowly and methodically...
"Brakes Breaks me..." ... I believe you meant "Breaks me" here, Dr. Ricky, as in to break, or broken...
Frightening...
~Dean
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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"It takes me forsakes me and then slowly and methodically...
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Frightening...
~Dean
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Caught thay error.
Cell phone guitze....
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work constitutes a reminiscence on excruciating dimensions of pain suffered by the protagonist.
The work highlights the incidence of the malaise and it's fixative as an instrument of physical and emotional torment on the protagonist.
The work earns it's texture through the use of personification, simile, metaphor and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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The work constitutes a reminiscence on excruciating dimensions of pain suffered by the protagonist.
The work highlights the incidence of the malaise and it's fixative as an instrument of physical and emotional torment on the protagonist.
The work earns it's texture through the use of personification, simile, metaphor and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Well reviewed. As always Lloyd.
Dr Ricky 1024
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Wet Scar, seems to be about the current healing process of an abdominal operation, but can easily be transposed to any of our festering hurts that never seem to heal.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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This poem, Wet Scar, seems to be about the current healing process of an abdominal operation, but can easily be transposed to any of our festering hurts that never seem to heal.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thanks Bill for your kind review dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the scar that comes at night and flashes in memories and scares; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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This speaks the scar that comes at night and flashes in memories and scares; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Paws4FX
I think it's supposed to be, "And it creeps..." but if not please forgive me.
When I've had my most regrets is a bit of a tongue twister.
I absolutely LOVE the "It takes me forsakes me line." Brilliant.
I enjoyed reading it.
Michael
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I think it's supposed to be, "And it creeps..." but if not please forgive me.
When I've had my most regrets is a bit of a tongue twister.
I absolutely LOVE the "It takes me forsakes me line." Brilliant.
I enjoyed reading it.
Michael
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thanks and "Ad" was miss spelled.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My prayers go to you dear friend for the problem you are having. Seems there is not good answer to what is wrong, except that man is not God.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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My prayers go to you dear friend for the problem you are having. Seems there is not good answer to what is wrong, except that man is not God.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Why thank you my dear Bob much appreciated always have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024
