~ Afterglow ~
Lanturne Poem19 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
I am sure this lanturne will leave a warm afterglow long after your departure. This one looks a bit squashed but has all the right ingredients. Is this form intended to produce the lantern-like picture or is that an optional extra?
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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I am sure this lanturne will leave a warm afterglow long after your departure. This one looks a bit squashed but has all the right ingredients. Is this form intended to produce the lantern-like picture or is that an optional extra?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much as always for your frank review. I adjusted my font as I did not want a squashed Lanturned on my hands. Have a lovely weekend. ~DD
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a lovely Lanturne poem, my friend. Great color choices and picture as well.
Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely Lanturne poem, my friend. Great color choices and picture as well.
Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Kerry, excuse my late response but thank you very much for your review on my Lanturne poem. Your comments were much appreciated. ~DD
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No worries, you're very welcome:)
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start
The poem is short but the messages is strong and long
That is how I try to live keep shining with good words and thoughts so my inner glow will burn with in others after I'm gone
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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You captured my attention from the start
The poem is short but the messages is strong and long
That is how I try to live keep shining with good words and thoughts so my inner glow will burn with in others after I'm gone
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I?m late in replying to this review MissCookie but thank you, again, for taking the time to share your comments. Warm blessings to you. ~DD
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You;'re very welcome. Take care
Cookie
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice lanturne poem, DD.
Looks just like the shape of a Japanese lantern.
You gotta leave you mark in life and the best way to do that is to shine.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Nice lanturne poem, DD.
Looks just like the shape of a Japanese lantern.
You gotta leave you mark in life and the best way to do that is to shine.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Dean, Sorry for the late response but thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Lanturne poem. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery and message
in your poem, DD.
-I agree with you that we
should always do our best
while we can, as that makes
a meaningful life.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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-Beautiful image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery and message
in your poem, DD.
-I agree with you that we
should always do our best
while we can, as that makes
a meaningful life.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Sorry Pam for the delay in response to thank you for taking the time to review my Lanturne poem. Your comments are very much appreciated, as always. ~DD
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You are very welcome, DD, and delay is no problem.
Comment from dmt1967
The picture, words and background work well together. I liked the explosiveness of the theme and the way it made me smile and feel. It definitely lit up my life lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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The picture, words and background work well together. I liked the explosiveness of the theme and the way it made me smile and feel. It definitely lit up my life lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Dmt, I do apologies for the length of time taken to thank you for your review on my Lanturne poem. Needless to say I am very grateful, always. Kind regards ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ideal and warm poem with shining sentiments of our memories after death. Your words are strangely uplifting considering the subject and the light has been turned on in your Lanturne, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is an ideal and warm poem with shining sentiments of our memories after death. Your words are strangely uplifting considering the subject and the light has been turned on in your Lanturne, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Dolly :-) I do apologies for the length of time taken to thank you for your review on my Lanturne poem. Needless to say I am very grateful, always. Kind regards ~DDoxo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and very good imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is a very well written Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and very good imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you Teri for taking the time to review my Lanturne poem. I do apologies for the length of time taken for me to come back but your comments are always appreciated. Blessings to you. ~DD
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well I'm working so furiously at the moment to brighten that shine I see sparks from the friction haha
Hmmm maybe it's those three 44+ degrees celcius days we just had in a row.
Whatever the case mate, mine is more like a glowing afterburn haha
Oh no, that's just the chilli repeating on me LMAO
All jest aside, GREAT POEM!!!
This should go in that little profound quotes book you're going to publish haha
Hugs P
xx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Well I'm working so furiously at the moment to brighten that shine I see sparks from the friction haha
Hmmm maybe it's those three 44+ degrees celcius days we just had in a row.
Whatever the case mate, mine is more like a glowing afterburn haha
Oh no, that's just the chilli repeating on me LMAO
All jest aside, GREAT POEM!!!
This should go in that little profound quotes book you're going to publish haha
Hugs P
xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you P. You?re the best. I truly appreciate the six. I was apprehensive about posting again as I have not been on the site or put pen to paper for a while. I?m still trying to climb out of this pit of sorrow. I keep slipping on the slightest of things.
Needless to say your words were a comfort, a breath of fresh air and fucking funny! ~Doxo
