Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is very well written and the underlying truth is amazing.
I find this so in every day life, not just for making stars.
When friends are down and you pump them up, they suddenly soar and leave you behind. I call it life.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Sharon, your words are spot on. I too know the truth of what you stated.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks humbly about helping hand to a friend in continuation if needed; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Continue writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you for your kind encouragement.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Nolan, not just movie stars my sweet friend...there are those who help others...and they have a problem remembering them a long the way...but I like the soup idea...sigh...very well written you...and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Linda, your continuous support means the world to me. You are greatly appreciated.

reply by l.raven on 29-Jan-2018

you are always so welcome my friend...always...love xxoo

reply by l.raven on 31-Jan-2018

HI Nolan, i wanted to clear up something...and nothing you have said my friend...my review was not to be sounded like i unapprecited anyone...i have always given to people until i couldn't give anymore...i have always done for people until i couldn't do anymore....and i never walked away from a friend or anyone else who needed me...I'm hoping a remark made was not at me...nothing you said my friend...thank you...just didn't want my review to sound like i would ever walk away from anyone...only when asked...and i still like the soup idea...love Linda xxoo

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, I Gave You Soup, is a testament to those who serve the downtrodden and destitute, who may never reciprocate that agape love ever to another. Sad and true, most likely.

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Hey thanks Bill. You continue to shock me. I suspect that you have lots of hidden depth.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
I appreciated this telling piece of unreciprocated friendship. How sad that some individuals forget those who helped them when they were just starting out...
Your verse lends itself well to be read aloud. A well-crafted piece.

Best Wishes,
diane

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you Diane, I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments.