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The Locket

Dare not look her in the eyes

2 total reviews 
Comment from MSJVClarke
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This is a very interesting poem. I like the flowing words that tell your story of the dark seductress and the spell she has on her prey. The sterling locket added some mystery and the ending was certainly a surprise.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Natalie Walker
Excellent
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This is an awesome poem. The tone is consistent, it flows well, and the story is unique with an intriguing ending.

I didn't notice any errors or typos.

Nice work!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Thank you, Natalie. Highly appreciated!