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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Bernie...where am I?"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Bernie, Where Am I, is a fun and perceptive look at a house move through the eyes of these delightfully playful and adorable pups. Nice reading.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Hi, Bill;
    Thank you so much for the lovely R&R,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sasha
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Lovely work with this story. It takes animals awhile to acclimate to a new environment. Some even try to leave and find their way back home. I am so pleased they are settling into their new home.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Hi, Sasha;
    Thank you so much for the thoughtful R&R. I think my Howie and Bernie stories are my favorite to write - but since I sell them now, the ones that I post here are more of my thoughtful ones.

    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story about the new place, and the acceptance of Howie and Bernie, when they get used to the new home. It is quite nerving for them to move from their old house to a new place.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Hi, Sandra;
    Thank you so much for reading the latest Bernie and Howie story. They are doing well - especially today, as I spend more time on the computer and less time putting things away. (I think we're all tired of the boxes.)

    ~patty~
Comment from Teri7
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Patty, This is a great story about Bernie and Howie getting to get acquainted with their new surrounds and home. You used such great wording and I love the picture. They are just the cutes little guys! I am glad they are happy along with you and Dave! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Hi, Teri;
    Thank you so much for reading Bernie's story. He really did take a bit to acclimate - much longer than Howie. But, he is happy and content now that more things are put away, and I'm back to writing more,

    ~patty~