Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I disagree with Anderson, I think he is making progress. How could she not be falling for him? Yes, there are obstacles, but I am sure they can overcome them. Great work with this chapter.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thank you again, for the wonderful review.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Don't lie? What if Ben does ask? Then LIE! Lie when you have to. It's not a crime or a sin if it prevents upsetting your father. Nightmares all that time must have been a drain. Now that Drew knows, how can he help? He can't cuddle her every night. :)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Drew may try to cuddle her. It might get interesting, but he doesn't. LOL Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awe bless them both. They are falling in love are they not? Lovely. A very gentle and lovely write, and I'm now looking forward to see what's happening next. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thank you for the kind review. They still have a lot to go through.

reply by Ulla on 28-Jan-2018

I'm sure! Ulla:)))

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very "sort of" romantic episode Barbara. Anderson stays in her room all night, (I know I would be anxious if my daughter spent the night in with my daughter) So she's having nightmares, what a terrible thing. Good job Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : going to Germany for my sixteen(th) birthday.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

I am off to fix that thank you for the catch and the kind review.

reply by royowen on 28-Jan-2018

Most welcome Barbara,

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This chapter Barbara was well written rich and seeing as well as imagery is it flowed well I saw in the grammar issues here to strip the measures firmly in place an object of an object or concepts were both gracefully included with this thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Barbara;
Aha - now we see that the gallant gentleman might have some designs on the young maiden.

I'm not surprised about the nightmares - those books gave me the creeps, too.

Looking forward to more; keep building the romance

~patty~

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thank you for the kind review.