Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hey DP. I very much like your voicing in this potlatch duo rhyme post. It's as if the bright white's jaunty bounce has the power to light the sky just by being.

Great job with this. I very much enjoyed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Glad you liked it so much, Gloria. Thanks for the nice comments and generous rating.

Joan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem you have submitted for the poetry potlatch. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri, for the kind review.

Joan

reply by Teri7 on 28-Jan-2018

you are so welcome Joan! Blessings, Teri

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

I'd have to say this is a fine piece here...
Didn't come across any problems at all...
My compliments, for a great 'Duo-Rhyhme'...

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I am glad you liked it.

Joan

reply by Wetbelly01 on 28-Jan-2018

You're very welcome!!

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your Potlatch poetry with us. Your rhyme scheme looks very difficult, and yet, you pulled it off well. A very nice poem,

~patty~

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Hi Patty, Thanks for reading and reviewing. I greatly appreciate it.


Joan

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This poetry Potlatch was well-written Regency Maslow's imagery flow dwells a Treadwell would know grammar issues ejecting objektiv content for both William place if the measures aligned perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and good luck

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thank you for the comments and for all the stars.

Joan

Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This looks like a good duo rhyme potlatch entry for the contest and quite a challenge. It appears that your met it with your continuous rhymes and it was a very nice and you brought dark to light making for a pleasant read.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks. I am pleased you like it.

dragonpoet