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A very short love affair

Be careful what you wish for

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Sounds like what would happen if my husband watched tv with me. We're so opposite when it comes to that. I watch a ton of reality tv but I also watch sports. You should watch Australian Football if you can. I think I found it on ESPN or maybe Fox Sports or something like it. Seriously, I don't think there are no rules and you'll have no idea what is going on...and I think that's what makes it so great. Sounds like it was time for her to leave. She could have at least cleaned and made a meal or two.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
    Many thanks.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Bites contest.
You've told a good story here.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
    Thznks snzron