Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

I think you did pretty darn good with this piece...
I surely don't see any problems with it...
You say a LOT in those few words!... My compliments!
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for your very kind review.

reply by Wetbelly01 on 27-Jan-2018

Your very welcome!

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no stars to give
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
Which is a perfect match
Your words truly moved me.
For a person that claims they can't write horror stories to me your on the right track
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading, Cookie and for always being so kind.

reply by misscookie on 27-Jan-2018

Your very welcome, it was my pleasure.

Cookie


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written two sentence horror flash fiction story. I think it is anyone's unspoken horror night in are to be buried six feet under ground when we wake up from a deep sleep.

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Yes, sound pretty horrifying. Thanks for reading.