Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Poetwatch

Enjoyed the poem. Out of sixes. The extent of your religious convictions are obvious. The message within your poem is one of hope, of what the Lord can do if you open yourself to him. Well done.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

Ray

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you Ray. I glad you liked it and I hope it brought a smile to your heart.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this. I like the message of faith and hope that you've shared. This is inspirational and thought provoking. It is a very good read. Well written and well done.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you Jeff. Everyone needs faith and hope in their lives.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about a deep faith and the loving voice of God that guides us through our lives. He never steers us in the wrong direction. He will lead us to our eternal home.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you Sandra. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This poem is very beautifully written! The way you worded this had a great flow to it, which made the overall feeling more peaceful and happy. Great job!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, Fabiha. My aim is to bring love of the heart.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

"A Loving Voice" is a beautiful witness to your belief and noteworthy. I enjoyed reading this poem and happy that you felt led to post a praise of our Lord.

Well dond
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you. I'm glad it brought joy to your heart.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing the love of our Lord with us. The poem had good sequencing in thought and rhyme. Very meaningful. Regards.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank Sugarray77. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem has a lot of rhyme but no standard rhyme scheme throughout but it clearly tells of God's love for us and how it will keep us strong. It shows how he keeps knocking until He is answered.


Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, dragonpoet. I could have done it with rhythm and rhyme but I just write the feelings.

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jan-2018

Don't mention it. Poetry is generally about the feelings whether formally rhymed or not.

dp

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I agree with you that God shows his love through many ways but is always there. A nicely written poem a joy to read and eye-catching with the choice of imagery.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you chcbeck. I glad it gave you joy in your heart.

Comment from NaughtieScribe

Exceptional

Absolutely beautiful. There is nothing more I can add, except I'm so very appreciative of the love and inspiration of this work. There is nothing to add or tweak. Very well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, NaughtieScribe, for your words. When I wrote it I didn't know if it was right, but it felt good. Thanks for the lovely stars. :)

Comment from Vickie Mitchell

Excellent

As a Christian I enjoyed the truth in this piece. I love to do spiritual poetry and share God's love. I am amazed at the artwork which similiarly portrays a cross and a crossroad. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you Vickie. I have many poems in my computer about our Creator and Savior. When I'm in despair I write to them and they answer me. I'm not a saint, but they dwell in my heart and spirit always.