Crumble
Begin anew. Six words17 total reviews
Comment from Fabiha_N
This piece is very inspiring in terms of telling people to keep going, even when there are large obstacles in the way. That's the way life is: if you face your challenges and end up back on square one, then don't give up. Go back in and try even harder until you succeed. I don't know if this is the direction you were going, but these are my thoughts on this poem. All in all, it's a very great poem!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This piece is very inspiring in terms of telling people to keep going, even when there are large obstacles in the way. That's the way life is: if you face your challenges and end up back on square one, then don't give up. Go back in and try even harder until you succeed. I don't know if this is the direction you were going, but these are my thoughts on this poem. All in all, it's a very great poem!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for your review and comments
Comment from jppoet
Congratulations, not only does your 6 word text say it so succintly but is in perfect affinity with the Fantabulous photo. Please take a peek at my
Valentine's Day, it may tickle your enzymes as well. Blessings.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Congratulations, not only does your 6 word text say it so succintly but is in perfect affinity with the Fantabulous photo. Please take a peek at my
Valentine's Day, it may tickle your enzymes as well. Blessings.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for your good review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've read a plethora of these six line poems today.
Must be a contest deadline coming up soon. That's the only time here something like this occurs.
Still, and despite that, this is one of the better ones I've read.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I've read a plethora of these six line poems today.
Must be a contest deadline coming up soon. That's the only time here something like this occurs.
Still, and despite that, this is one of the better ones I've read.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!!
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My pleasure, you're welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
I absolutely agree and believe in the message of your offering.
A confession: I thought you meant "definitely," and opposed to "defiantly." And if you didn't, keep with defiant: one would have to be defiant to rebuild that poor house!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
I absolutely agree and believe in the message of your offering.
A confession: I thought you meant "definitely," and opposed to "defiantly." And if you didn't, keep with defiant: one would have to be defiant to rebuild that poor house!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your great comments and review. Yes, I meant ?defiant?. Regards.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Six Word Poetry writing prompt.
A good message in your six words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Six Word Poetry writing prompt.
A good message in your six words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the good review.
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Thank you for the good review.
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Thank you for the good review.
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Thank you for the good review.
Comment from LIJ Red
Let me guess, a California mudslide or Tennessee truck driver. I am not a great fan of short short poems as a rule, but your art and commonsense look fine to me.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Let me guess, a California mudslide or Tennessee truck driver. I am not a great fan of short short poems as a rule, but your art and commonsense look fine to me.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the review and comments!!
Comment from shieldsE
You certainly presented a shocking image. It really got my attention. You also made good work of your six words. I enjoyed this posting. Keep on keeping on.
E.Shields
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You certainly presented a shocking image. It really got my attention. You also made good work of your six words. I enjoyed this posting. Keep on keeping on.
E.Shields
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks!!!
