Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written six-word poem. When the foundation is not strong and steady the house will crumble underneath us and finally fall down leaving nothing at all.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thank you for your comments and good review.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Great picture to match your theme. Relevant and well voiced. the poems works both as an aphoristic an as a caption for the picture!


Good luck in the contest.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.

reply by rama devi on 27-Jan-2018

Sure! :-))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's quite a stunning picture! It does take a lot of courage when our world either physically or emotionally crumbles. But we can rebuild and we must. Great message! Powerful use of the word - "defiantly."

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This six-word poem, Crumble, sends out the challenge to assess all damage and do what needs to be done to get the show back on the road. I might be mixing my metaphors here; sorry. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Bill for the comments and good review.

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Bill for the comments and good review.

Comment from Dan Diego

Excellent

Reviewed in the blind before voting in the contest booth. Everything comes together quite will in this poem - title, graphic, words. Great job.. Good luck in the booth. This is highly competitive.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the comments and good review.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Mystery Poet,

You chose your six words wisely and formed a great message. I love that picture to silently send it all home. Defiance is a terrific word that I must say more often. I tend to cower and blame myself. This is a superior message, and I love it. Sorry I'm out of sixes. This is a fine contest entry that I send fist bumps of approval your way.

Sincerely Joy xx

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for your good review and comments. **fistbump**

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for your good review and comments. **fistbump**

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Wow! An amazing picture for your well written six word poem for the contest.
Each word is so important when you only have "six" and you definitely made the most of each one.

Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments. Regards.

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments. Regards.

Comment from NaughtieScribe

Excellent

LOL, I love it. Yes, when the worst happens the best revenge against bad luck is to make your own good. The pic brings your words together with in your face humor. Very well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you for your comments and good review.

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you for your comments and good review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem pushes us to see that we can rise from difficulties. It is a wonder that his house could stand with half of it missing. It shows the strength in character needed to overcome hardship and start over.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments.

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jan-2018

Don't mention it.

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Comment from Mara Coy

Excellent

You did a good job with your poem, it is meant to have strength, although its shortness. I love the power of the word "defiantly build " that part it is more of an imperative sentence which allows the reader to assume the command of the action which gives the sensation of "get up and do it"

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.