Oh, What a Night
Love is unpredictable.17 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely written poem about passion, making love and its result. It is good when married couples can still have passion. The artwork shows that love can sometimes cause our eyes to blur from tears of happiness.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Nicely written poem about passion, making love and its result. It is good when married couples can still have passion. The artwork shows that love can sometimes cause our eyes to blur from tears of happiness.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
brigitte
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My pleasure, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A wonderful, sensual poem that takes us on a journey of untamed passion, then after the happiness that night brought with the exciting climax of a sister for your son.
Brilliant
Mitchell
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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A wonderful, sensual poem that takes us on a journey of untamed passion, then after the happiness that night brought with the exciting climax of a sister for your son.
Brilliant
Mitchell
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Sometimes words to pen come from memories, some bad and some wonderful. We are blessed with our children, two sons and a daughter and grandchildren. Love is always the catalyst to any experience. Thak you for reading and the kind comments.
Have a wonderful Sunday!
:)Brigitte
Comment from l.raven
HI Brigitte, LOL...sounds like a night that will never be forgotten sweet girl...I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written....oh true love...LOL...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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HI Brigitte, LOL...sounds like a night that will never be forgotten sweet girl...I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written....oh true love...LOL...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Yes, memories can bring forth words to pen; that was what happened with this, true and unforgettable. We have been blessed with two sons and a daughter. It affirms the fact LOVE is the catalyst for all things good.
Thank you for reading and the lovely comments.
Have a wonderful Sunday!
:)Brigitte
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your so welcome Brigitte...and you have a wonderful Sunday as well...xxoo love
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Life is good!
Love,
Brigitte
Comment from Commando
A commendable presentation of passion and love, Brigitte. I'm here to say--in a shy way, "You're throws of passion remind me of a hard hit baseball. It went over the fence--and you scored a home run. Oh, by the way! Why were you blushing? The only one watching--was God! Of course, you heard what He said, "Be fruitful and multiply, my child!" Sweet Jesus--You sure listened, huh? The artwork by, booklotto is awesome--and so is your writing. Hear the train? Toot, toot!
xx Bill
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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A commendable presentation of passion and love, Brigitte. I'm here to say--in a shy way, "You're throws of passion remind me of a hard hit baseball. It went over the fence--and you scored a home run. Oh, by the way! Why were you blushing? The only one watching--was God! Of course, you heard what He said, "Be fruitful and multiply, my child!" Sweet Jesus--You sure listened, huh? The artwork by, booklotto is awesome--and so is your writing. Hear the train? Toot, toot!
xx Bill
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you the awesome review of this true poem that spewed out of my memory at a given moment in time. Love, the beginning of everything, and in the end, ultimate reunion with God, the awaited ultimate love.
You are a friend that is honest and admirable in the missions you accomplish. May you experience a love that sustains, nourishes, and fullfils you every dream. God is the spirit on that train...by your side..on the way to wherever he wishes you to be.
Love, hugs, and a smooch, (Jan won't mind)
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about passion and love during a wonderful night together with a partner. The reults of that passionate night will be born nine months later.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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A very well-written poem about passion and love during a wonderful night together with a partner. The reults of that passionate night will be born nine months later.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. We were blessed with this unexpected surprise. Sometimes the unexpected brings the most pleasure to life. God is good!
:)Brigitte
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Oh What a Night, has a nice memory to make the creation of a new life somewhat more reasonable. Kids are the sour that makes the sweet sweeter. Not really. Yea, Kids!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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This poem, Oh What a Night, has a nice memory to make the creation of a new life somewhat more reasonable. Kids are the sour that makes the sweet sweeter. Not really. Yea, Kids!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading. Yes, we were blessed with the birth of our daughter even it was not planned. I still remember...blushing.
I appreciate your lovely comments.
Love my kids and grandchildren!
Keep smiling and making memories.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Gert sherwood
What a nice poem about your night of passion
Brigitte Elko very clever of how your night of rapture in nine months your sons had a new baby sister
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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What a nice poem about your night of passion
Brigitte Elko very clever of how your night of rapture in nine months your sons had a new baby sister
Gert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thank for the read and the kind comments.
True story in a poem. I wasn't feeling very profound and this came forth.
:Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from D.F. Wood
This is good, clean writing. I think you did a very nice job describing a wonderful moment that later provided the ultimate reward. I can actually remember the night my wife and I consummated our son, nearly 24 years ago. It's amazing how one time can be so much more special than another. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is good, clean writing. I think you did a very nice job describing a wonderful moment that later provided the ultimate reward. I can actually remember the night my wife and I consummated our son, nearly 24 years ago. It's amazing how one time can be so much more special than another. Nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Yes, it is a true little poem. The mind always remembers what is most dear. Thank you for the read and kind comments.
Have a great day!
:)Brigitte
Comment from Harry Smith
Beautifully written is this short but full of emotions. I liked how well you described the event that lead to the birth of your daughter. Well done!!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Beautifully written is this short but full of emotions. I liked how well you described the event that lead to the birth of your daughter. Well done!!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your read and kind comments.
:)Brigitte
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You are welcome!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Loved your use of "mister," and you had your twist alright. I wasn't expecting the "sister." I was caught unawares mostly because of your "mister" talk. I was not expecting him to be your husband. Fun, fun poem. You clearly have a knack with language. Enjoyed the poem immensely. Just curious though, where was your restaurant?
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Loved your use of "mister," and you had your twist alright. I wasn't expecting the "sister." I was caught unawares mostly because of your "mister" talk. I was not expecting him to be your husband. Fun, fun poem. You clearly have a knack with language. Enjoyed the poem immensely. Just curious though, where was your restaurant?
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. This was a true story! We were blessed by this surprise. My restaurant was on Lake Chesdin, in Chestefield, Virginia. It was fine dining; candles, lake view, fireplace in winter and elegant .Loved it! It was hard work as I did everything and anything that needed doing. Some times employees were late or sick,etc. I hosted many group gatherings and enjoyed every minute. I made a lot of friends as customers returned time after time. Since I was still teaching during the day, the stress of doing both the restaurant and my job plus taking care of my husband and children made me have to choose. I operated it for 3 and 1/2 years. This reply is lenghty, so sorry.
Sorry for the long reply. ( Yes, my twist came back!!)
:)Brigitte
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Lovely Virginia. Your restaurant must have been so special. I can't believe you ran it and taught school. That really is unbelievable.
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Yep We opened at 5 and I left school at 3. Went home made sure family had meal and off I went. My children were old enough to help. One son was my number 1 bartender and the other one a waiter while my daughter waitressed and hosted. Hubby sometimes came and helped close up and take out trash. hectic life but fun. On weekends and Mondays, (we were closed) I helped plant tobacco. Life is good.
Now, writing is my passion and dream come true. My second book is coming out in 3 weeks. An adult book this time. Excited.
:)Brigitte
