Hate Speaks
Avoid when possible37 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
SO BEAUTIFUL, boggie nights! You describe hate perfectly telling about the senselessness of it and how it causes words. You tell about the pain and destruction causes this world. Your verses are so cool and rhythmic to the beat and strike a warning in the reader. Sorry, out of sixes, but next time. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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SO BEAUTIFUL, boggie nights! You describe hate perfectly telling about the senselessness of it and how it causes words. You tell about the pain and destruction causes this world. Your verses are so cool and rhythmic to the beat and strike a warning in the reader. Sorry, out of sixes, but next time. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for such a great review. Your opinion means a lot to me.
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Thank you so much for such a great review. Your opinion means a lot to me.
Comment from doggymad
Great write and a great description of what harm hate can bring about.
We never think of hate as being damaging to our selves but believe we can project it on other people
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Great write and a great description of what harm hate can bring about.
We never think of hate as being damaging to our selves but believe we can project it on other people
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my poem, it's always appreciated.
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my poem, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is my favorite poem that I have read in days. You know hate when you see it. Like you said, hate is fueled by "anguish, envy, fear" and it is the cause of most suffering in life. I wish it could explode. Hate is disastrous whether expressed in words or bombs. Good job. The kind of poem that people need to post on their refrigerator.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is my favorite poem that I have read in days. You know hate when you see it. Like you said, hate is fueled by "anguish, envy, fear" and it is the cause of most suffering in life. I wish it could explode. Hate is disastrous whether expressed in words or bombs. Good job. The kind of poem that people need to post on their refrigerator.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the awesome review and for the six star rating. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Thank you so much for the awesome review and for the six star rating. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Cycler
Very well said. Your conclusion is great about hate. So many of us do not realize it is in there. It is quite sneaky, revealing itself when hands are played. The pattern you used is very effective - causing the reader to pause before each thought and each thought is well laid out. The infrequent rhyme with hate, and then your other rhymes make this poem catchy and nice reading.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Very well said. Your conclusion is great about hate. So many of us do not realize it is in there. It is quite sneaky, revealing itself when hands are played. The pattern you used is very effective - causing the reader to pause before each thought and each thought is well laid out. The infrequent rhyme with hate, and then your other rhymes make this poem catchy and nice reading.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review and the six stars, you made my day.
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Thank you so much for the great review and the six stars, you made my day.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
The sixth star for the last two lines alone, love that.
Excellent poem, I really liked this one. Great pacing, very astute, and some lovely personification. And, again, a wonderful close.
Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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The sixth star for the last two lines alone, love that.
Excellent poem, I really liked this one. Great pacing, very astute, and some lovely personification. And, again, a wonderful close.
Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for such a wonderful review and six stars, I really appreciate and value your opinion.
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Thanks so much for such a wonderful review and six stars, I really appreciate and value your opinion.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Hate spreads like fire if is ignited and you describe the consequences of such feelings which as you say are in all of us if we allow it to flame with fire, good luck with your poem, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hate spreads like fire if is ignited and you describe the consequences of such feelings which as you say are in all of us if we allow it to flame with fire, good luck with your poem, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for reading, your opinion means,a lot to me.
Comment from Fabiha_N
I really enjoyed reading this! In this poem, you captured the essence of hate, and all the destruction it causes, very well. The same phrase that kept being repeated- "I am Hate"- added extra emphasis to the flow of the words as well. Great job :)
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed reading this! In this poem, you captured the essence of hate, and all the destruction it causes, very well. The same phrase that kept being repeated- "I am Hate"- added extra emphasis to the flow of the words as well. Great job :)
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review, I value the imput from fellow writers.
