Hate Speaks
Avoid when possible37 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about hate that is inside each one of us and just wait for an opportunity to shows its head and speaks through us for everyone to see and observe. It is a very bad emotion that can make us sick in many ways.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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A very well-written poem about hate that is inside each one of us and just wait for an opportunity to shows its head and speaks through us for everyone to see and observe. It is a very bad emotion that can make us sick in many ways.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this great review and for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Splendid writing. Hate is a disease that spreads on the winds of fear and insecurity.
You have written of it well and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Hate is insidious and your last lines ring very true. Good work!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Splendid writing. Hate is a disease that spreads on the winds of fear and insecurity.
You have written of it well and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Hate is insidious and your last lines ring very true. Good work!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, and for your insightful comments. I really appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Five stars only because I'm out of sixes. This is so accurately penned. Hate does all the negative things you have mentioned... And more.
I like that you have used a dark background because it is demonstrative of the effects of hate.
The rhyming is great, so is the flow. When read aloud it is impactful.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Five stars only because I'm out of sixes. This is so accurately penned. Hate does all the negative things you have mentioned... And more.
I like that you have used a dark background because it is demonstrative of the effects of hate.
The rhyming is great, so is the flow. When read aloud it is impactful.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you. The contest is past and I didnt win, but having other people read my work and give me such positive feedback is it's own reward. Thank you so much.
Comment from victor 66
Well, Ms. Boogienights, your poem certainly lifted my spirits. (possible humor). As I read your work, it got me thinking... what if hate is genetic? What if it is passed on like a recessive gene? Sometimes skipping a generation or two, but always comes back. Can it be just from how a person is raised? His/her environment? Your writing is true in that hatred seems to be always there and just keeps coming back. But why? We have evolved and have learned so much, why can't we get rid of it? This was most thought provoking. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Well, Ms. Boogienights, your poem certainly lifted my spirits. (possible humor). As I read your work, it got me thinking... what if hate is genetic? What if it is passed on like a recessive gene? Sometimes skipping a generation or two, but always comes back. Can it be just from how a person is raised? His/her environment? Your writing is true in that hatred seems to be always there and just keeps coming back. But why? We have evolved and have learned so much, why can't we get rid of it? This was most thought provoking. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reading. You bring up some very intriguing questions I'll have to think about. I'm so glad you liked my poem.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
No no no no I hate this....wait wrong word ....there's always a place for me....nnnnnnoooooooooooo I'm running screaming into the night....wait I hate to run.grrrrrrrr you are right...did I mention noooooooooooooooooooppppp and it's 22* I will just lie on my back and run in the warmth...I love the warmth....whew balance restored.
God bless...ps loved your poem.....love wins love wins love wins
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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No no no no I hate this....wait wrong word ....there's always a place for me....nnnnnnoooooooooooo I'm running screaming into the night....wait I hate to run.grrrrrrrr you are right...did I mention noooooooooooooooooooppppp and it's 22* I will just lie on my back and run in the warmth...I love the warmth....whew balance restored.
God bless...ps loved your poem.....love wins love wins love wins
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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You are too funny. I love this review! :) Thank you so much for reading my poem.
Comment from WriterTess
A great job with this poem. Draws on some deep, dark emotions, fully realized in your poem. Strong verbiage, stark, yet powerful imagery, it all relates very well, tied together with the inevitable sum of the closing passage. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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A great job with this poem. Draws on some deep, dark emotions, fully realized in your poem. Strong verbiage, stark, yet powerful imagery, it all relates very well, tied together with the inevitable sum of the closing passage. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Wow! I'm always blown away when someone e honors me with a six star rating. You made my week. Thank you.
Comment from moonsunrise
Your very well written poem speaks volumes. Hate can consume an entire being's soul. One must continually strive to look at the positive side of life as hate will destroy a soul without batting an eye. Let's pray for more love than hate in our human family.
Thanks for sharing. The image was perfect for your poem
Kind regards.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Your very well written poem speaks volumes. Hate can consume an entire being's soul. One must continually strive to look at the positive side of life as hate will destroy a soul without batting an eye. Let's pray for more love than hate in our human family.
Thanks for sharing. The image was perfect for your poem
Kind regards.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review. I love your name by the way. :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Your poetry does an excellent job of showing just how insidious this emotion is and how much pain and destruction it can cause.
Too many lives are thriving on hate right now. Hate crimes are up, and the world is a dark place.
Thank you for sharing,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi there,
Your poetry does an excellent job of showing just how insidious this emotion is and how much pain and destruction it can cause.
Too many lives are thriving on hate right now. Hate crimes are up, and the world is a dark place.
Thank you for sharing,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I always appreciate hearing from you. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Hate Speaks, carries the first-person, negative message down through the occasionally rhyming verse and makes note that "there's (always) a place for me." Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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This free verse, Hate Speaks, carries the first-person, negative message down through the occasionally rhyming verse and makes note that "there's (always) a place for me." Nice.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review, it's means as not to hear from fellow writers.
Comment from Violet WolfChild
Honest and True. The image you chose goes perfectly with your content. It's dark and angry and beautiful. The ending truly brings it all together. We are all capable of hate.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Honest and True. The image you chose goes perfectly with your content. It's dark and angry and beautiful. The ending truly brings it all together. We are all capable of hate.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Than you so much for the great rating and the six stars.You made my day!
