Giddles Robinson
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Comment from Natalie Walker
This is a fun short story. It is clever and a fun read. Mr. Giddles seems like quite a charcter.
I was a little confused at the beginning, didn't really know what I was reading, maybe it would help to have a brief synopsis in the description?
I didn't notice any errors or typos.
Nice work!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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This is a fun short story. It is clever and a fun read. Mr. Giddles seems like quite a charcter.
I was a little confused at the beginning, didn't really know what I was reading, maybe it would help to have a brief synopsis in the description?
I didn't notice any errors or typos.
Nice work!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello mermaids I love your story about your cat liking to looks at himself in the mirror no way he is dumb he sure know how to attention from humans.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Hello mermaids I love your story about your cat liking to looks at himself in the mirror no way he is dumb he sure know how to attention from humans.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading about Giddles, not the brightest cat. Elaine
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Hello mermaids
don't let you cat hear you say that Giddles is not the brightest cat
Gert
Comment from Wetbelly01
Seems to me this cat is in love with... Itself!!
Thanks for sharing this piece... Too bad you couldn't get "Gid"
to respond very well LOL!...
Didn't come across any 'glitches'....
My compliments, Well Done!!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Seems to me this cat is in love with... Itself!!
Thanks for sharing this piece... Too bad you couldn't get "Gid"
to respond very well LOL!...
Didn't come across any 'glitches'....
My compliments, Well Done!!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading and enjoying the world of Giddles Robinson. I appreciate your positive comments Elaine
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You're very welcome!
Comment from LIJ Red
Ms. Meow is exhausted and call for a wrap to the interview--calls?
I knew a Giddles, but he went by Snowball. An excellent post.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Ms. Meow is exhausted and call for a wrap to the interview--calls?
I knew a Giddles, but he went by Snowball. An excellent post.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Calls does sound better. Snowball must be Giddles' brother. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Ricky1024
This was inspiring and well-written I thoroughly enjoyed this rich and seem as well as imagery is it flowed well with no grammar issues strip to measure for perfectly in place eject an object the contents were excellent and firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This was inspiring and well-written I thoroughly enjoyed this rich and seem as well as imagery is it flowed well with no grammar issues strip to measure for perfectly in place eject an object the contents were excellent and firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Gloria ....
I like Giddles. He's got a great sense of humour and that is a must in today's world. Great good fun interview, mermaids. A family jester is a must.
Thanks for the smiles,
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I like Giddles. He's got a great sense of humour and that is a must in today's world. Great good fun interview, mermaids. A family jester is a must.
Thanks for the smiles,
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful and amusing story, it describes a lot of cats that I know of, and yes they definitely are in control of themselves and their environment, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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What a wonderful and amusing story, it describes a lot of cats that I know of, and yes they definitely are in control of themselves and their environment, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Dumbledor
Tops for smiles, and entertaining reading. So well written with great dialogue, and interaction between the cats. Has the cats nature down to a tee, and expressed so well in human terms and the described behaviour of ''Mr Giddles'' Enjoyed reading this, and mostly with a smile.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Tops for smiles, and entertaining reading. So well written with great dialogue, and interaction between the cats. Has the cats nature down to a tee, and expressed so well in human terms and the described behaviour of ''Mr Giddles'' Enjoyed reading this, and mostly with a smile.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
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Most welcome mermaids.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Mermaids,
LOL. You made me think of our current president. Was that your intent? Anyway I read it and had to laugh.
This could be improved by not repeating words and adding diversity unlike our current commander in chief. For example here is a suggested edit for this section.
Giddles turns around several times in a circle. He then returns to staring at the wall.
Suggested Edit: Giddles turns around in a circle several times. He then resumes staring at the wall.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Dear Mermaids,
LOL. You made me think of our current president. Was that your intent? Anyway I read it and had to laugh.
This could be improved by not repeating words and adding diversity unlike our current commander in chief. For example here is a suggested edit for this section.
Giddles turns around several times in a circle. He then returns to staring at the wall.
Suggested Edit: Giddles turns around in a circle several times. He then resumes staring at the wall.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I appreciate your suggestions, they improve the writing and prose is not my strongest. You have me laughing at the analogy to our current president. I think Giddles is more intelligent. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from wordsfromsue
Who could not love Giddles? :-)
You nailed the true essence of a superior cat. Ignore your human self and stare at the wall. Unless you're holding a container of food, of course!
Great scene setting and hilarious interview. :-)
The picture is priceless!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Who could not love Giddles? :-)
You nailed the true essence of a superior cat. Ignore your human self and stare at the wall. Unless you're holding a container of food, of course!
Great scene setting and hilarious interview. :-)
The picture is priceless!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks for a great review, glad you enjoyed my story. Elaine
