Pop-Pop
my father91 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful poem in tribute to your father. Your words paint a picture of a man that filled his life with love for his family, and he will always live on in your memories. Thanks for sharing your emotional poem with us,
cheers.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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A beautiful poem in tribute to your father. Your words paint a picture of a man that filled his life with love for his family, and he will always live on in your memories. Thanks for sharing your emotional poem with us,
cheers.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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HI Pearl, he was a wonderful man who loved his family...and they loved him as well...thank you so much for going back and reviewing my poem...and for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello L. Raven,
Wonderful presentation, and lot of thanks for letting us know about your worth following father!
Although I'm too late in responding due to some unavoidable circumstances, but that matters little.
"...my father found his treasure within his family
a family that cherished everything about him
he was our father, grandfather, friend, our hero
and those who knew him, admired and loved him
called him Pop-Pop"
Excellent!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hello L. Raven,
Wonderful presentation, and lot of thanks for letting us know about your worth following father!
Although I'm too late in responding due to some unavoidable circumstances, but that matters little.
"...my father found his treasure within his family
a family that cherished everything about him
he was our father, grandfather, friend, our hero
and those who knew him, admired and loved him
called him Pop-Pop"
Excellent!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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HI RP, you are never to late my sweet friend...I miss him so much...things you never thought would ever be remembered...are....I hope everything with you is ok...thank care...don't make me worry...thank you so much RP for all your stars...you so make me smile...and I love your wonderful review...God Bless sweet guy...love Linda xxoo
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L. Raven, Most Welcome! & Thanks for your lovely words.
Have a pleasant weekend,
RP
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you have a pleasant weekend as well...sooooooo welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello lraven (Linda)
my Fanstory friend the way you wrote about your wonderful Dad of how much you admired him Ex.
how he taught us to love
how not to put ourselves above others
to honor our family and friends
they would always be there for us
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hello lraven (Linda)
my Fanstory friend the way you wrote about your wonderful Dad of how much you admired him Ex.
how he taught us to love
how not to put ourselves above others
to honor our family and friends
they would always be there for us
Gert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hi Gert, he was an amazing man...he helped anyone who needed it...and he loved his family...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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smiles
I wonder if I should write about my Dad?
even today his ways of life were what I thought are to be remembered
Gert
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of cause Gert...he was your father sweet girl...I bet it would be beautiful...write it...I would be more than happy to review it...love to you...xxoo
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You are welcome Linda
Will do
Gert
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I will wait for it...smiling...xxoo
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When I get in done. Gert
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let me know...I want to read it...xxoo
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okay will send you a message.
Gert
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thank you...xxoo
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautifully written, deeply moving, and heart-felt tribute to your dear father. I am sure he is aware of the love his family and friends feel for him. I enjoyed this very much and the photo of him is so precious.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This is a beautifully written, deeply moving, and heart-felt tribute to your dear father. I am sure he is aware of the love his family and friends feel for him. I enjoyed this very much and the photo of him is so precious.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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HI Sasha, so good to see you sweet girl...thank you so much for going back and reviewing my poem...and thank you for a wonderful review...I do miss him...sigh...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Marge Setzer
This is a beautiful picture of your dad. I especially liked stanzas 4,5 and 6. The brevity had great impact because of your word choices, a succinct portrait of his values in just a few words. I think you might consider including the part described above about getting to his home - the dirt road leading to the dirt road, the critters arriving when he put out the corn. These comments enhance how he lived a simple life and how he felt about animals. I enjoyed this portrait. Thanks for sharing. Marge
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is a beautiful picture of your dad. I especially liked stanzas 4,5 and 6. The brevity had great impact because of your word choices, a succinct portrait of his values in just a few words. I think you might consider including the part described above about getting to his home - the dirt road leading to the dirt road, the critters arriving when he put out the corn. These comments enhance how he lived a simple life and how he felt about animals. I enjoyed this portrait. Thanks for sharing. Marge
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hi Marge, that's fine what you would consider...but what is wrong with the poem itself...you don't rate poems on you personal opinion...you rate them on mistakes made...you need to read the FanStory laws before reviewing...thank you...
Comment from mermaids
Your father reminds me of my father, he lived to be 86 years old and fought in WWII. He lived for his family, like your father did. This is a poem that brings forth good feelings in the reader and I love how your father fed the wild animals corn.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Your father reminds me of my father, he lived to be 86 years old and fought in WWII. He lived for his family, like your father did. This is a poem that brings forth good feelings in the reader and I love how your father fed the wild animals corn.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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HI Elaine, he loved the animals on his land...so did I ...I am so sorry for the loss of your father...he does sounds a lot like mine...they are very special men...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love you..Linda xxoo
Comment from MissMerri
This is so nice, Linda. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how it feels to lose a much-loved father. Nothing ever fills the void in your heart. You've done a great job of describing the man who loved and was loved by his family. I hope it was at least a little bit healing to write this.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is so nice, Linda. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how it feels to lose a much-loved father. Nothing ever fills the void in your heart. You've done a great job of describing the man who loved and was loved by his family. I hope it was at least a little bit healing to write this.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hi Adonna, I am so sorry for the loss of your father...we were blessed to have my father so long in our lives...and I think you are right when you say nothing can fill the void in your heart...we had our ups and downs in our family...but the love was always there...he was an amazing man to many...I miss him and wish he were here...but I am thankful he is with God...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from angel123
I like your personal poem in memory of your father. It is well-written and well received. It flows with love and reminds me a lot of my father who also passed away. He was also a humble man who loved his family and put them first. Thank you for sharing such a personal story. I also like that you used his picture for your artwork choice.
Poetry is medicine for the soul.
Angel123
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I like your personal poem in memory of your father. It is well-written and well received. It flows with love and reminds me a lot of my father who also passed away. He was also a humble man who loved his family and put them first. Thank you for sharing such a personal story. I also like that you used his picture for your artwork choice.
Poetry is medicine for the soul.
Angel123
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hi Angel, I am so sorry for the loss of your father...I know how it hurts...I miss my father so much...he loved God...and he loved his family...thank you so much for a wonderful review...and thank you for all your wonderful stars...you are so welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Rasmine
Dear L. Raven,
I am so sorry about your Pop-pop. This is very sad, but a beautiful dedication to his memory. I bet he would love it, and maybe he does.
I have a suggestion:
oh how he taught us to love
(maybe 'and') how not to put ourselves above others
to honor our family and friends
they would always be there for us
TC,
Nome
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Dear L. Raven,
I am so sorry about your Pop-pop. This is very sad, but a beautiful dedication to his memory. I bet he would love it, and maybe he does.
I have a suggestion:
oh how he taught us to love
(maybe 'and') how not to put ourselves above others
to honor our family and friends
they would always be there for us
TC,
Nome
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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HI Nome, thank you so much for your help...he truly is missed...but he is now with God...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from N.K. Wagner
My condolences, Linda. You've written a beautiful tribute to a very special man. No more important lesson can be taught to our children than that they are loved. Hugs. Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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My condolences, Linda. You've written a beautiful tribute to a very special man. No more important lesson can be taught to our children than that they are loved. Hugs. Nancy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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HI Nancy, he was a simple man...he loved his family...and he loved fishing...thank you so much my friend for a great review...love Linda xxoo
