Comment from Ogden

Excellent

It's not clear what happened to you, or who was abusing you, but the most important thing is that you put an end to it.

There is no justification for abuse.

Don (aka Ogden)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is an interesting story for the 'Lanturne Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in so few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Lois, don't ever let any one stop you in your tracks...just walk on by with head held high...very well written sweet girl...and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And just this small statement is powerful indeed. It brings so much into play, but of its meaning, I sense determination and triumph.
Hope this does well for you.
Have a great day.
RGstar

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

It feels good to walk away from a bully and feel strong about it.

I wish you could center your message. I think you'd get a better lanturne shape on the page. However, that's just my preference.

Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a great poem in the format. I only have one problem with it, You should change the red font to white on the gray. The only way I could read it was to take it to classic and highlight it. Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Very nice lanturne poem. There comes a time when all you can do is walk out. Usually, it relieves one of a lot of stress.

I would suggest that you change your font color. It's very hard to read. 8-)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

Well written and explicit with so few words. It is a Laturne poem of perfection. Good luck in the contest. The picture you chose is wonderful for the poem.

:)Brigitte

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Just wanted to let you know that I cannot see the poem below the picture. You need to edit this and make sure the type is visible and legible. I am not marking you down for this - I have done it myself a time or two LOL

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Good for you and a brave and wise choice. Too many put up with
cruelty time after time. It takes courage to say no more. I know. I have been there. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018