Never Again
Never will I subject myself to someone's cruelty34 total reviews
Comment from CD Richards
Obviously, there was something unpleasant going on here to which we (the readers) aren't privy. This poem is effective as much for what it doesn't say as what it does. It leaves intriguing questions unanswered.
Good image selection, striking physical design, and correct lanturne form. A well-written submission. Best of luck with it.
Craig
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Obviously, there was something unpleasant going on here to which we (the readers) aren't privy. This poem is effective as much for what it doesn't say as what it does. It leaves intriguing questions unanswered.
Good image selection, striking physical design, and correct lanturne form. A well-written submission. Best of luck with it.
Craig
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from James H. Oldfield
It's almost like a release, isn't it?
Very well-worded lanturne, I liked it a lot, and it carried so much in just the relatively few words.
Best of luck in the contest, a very strong entry.
Great job, and take care.
-James
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It's almost like a release, isn't it?
Very well-worded lanturne, I liked it a lot, and it carried so much in just the relatively few words.
Best of luck in the contest, a very strong entry.
Great job, and take care.
-James
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lanturne poem. Sometimes it I'd better to leave the source of conflict than trying to work out the problem, especially when the other person is really cruel and unapproachable.
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A very well-written Lanturne poem. Sometimes it I'd better to leave the source of conflict than trying to work out the problem, especially when the other person is really cruel and unapproachable.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from robina1978
An excellent picture that complements your poem perfectly. You wrote a faultless Lanturne poem. The only hint I could give you, is to centre it. I am sorry it happened to you.
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An excellent picture that complements your poem perfectly. You wrote a faultless Lanturne poem. The only hint I could give you, is to centre it. I am sorry it happened to you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu
Hi there
It is a difficult genre to write. You have done well. A lovely poem. It shines because of its simplicity. Nicely crafted poem.
Congratulations.
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Hi there
It is a difficult genre to write. You have done well. A lovely poem. It shines because of its simplicity. Nicely crafted poem.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
I really like this Loanna. Because the incident has not been expanded upon, due to the limitations of the form, that gives your reader lots of room to wiggle their own pain in a similar situation.
Very nicely done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Gloria
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I really like this Loanna. Because the incident has not been expanded upon, due to the limitations of the form, that gives your reader lots of room to wiggle their own pain in a similar situation.
Very nicely done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Spitfire
I assume this is a case of a bully and you are the target.
What happens when the target gets farther away. Good move. Why stay to defend yourself? That's what the bully wants.
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I assume this is a case of a bully and you are the target.
What happens when the target gets farther away. Good move. Why stay to defend yourself? That's what the bully wants.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
Comment from trumby
Well-written poem. Whatever the situation is, I am glad you just walked out with your head's up. I am just thinking, a bigger font will be better. Your image is fantastic, great choice anyway. Thanks for sharing.
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Well-written poem. Whatever the situation is, I am glad you just walked out with your head's up. I am just thinking, a bigger font will be better. Your image is fantastic, great choice anyway. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
Comment from crzypnter
LonnaLois,
this is a well conveyed and composed lanturne poem. I like the turning point that you express...
Proud of you that you have mustered up the courage to hold your head high and walk out... Good for you! God bless
August
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LonnaLois,
this is a well conveyed and composed lanturne poem. I like the turning point that you express...
Proud of you that you have mustered up the courage to hold your head high and walk out... Good for you! God bless
August
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
Good for you. I'm happy for you that you were able to lift your chin and walk out.
Excellent artwork! I do think a darker or larger font would help with the presentation.
PS I'm proud of you too.
Blessings
Janet
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Good for you. I'm happy for you that you were able to lift your chin and walk out.
Excellent artwork! I do think a darker or larger font would help with the presentation.
PS I'm proud of you too.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
