Never Again
Never will I subject myself to someone's cruelty34 total reviews
Comment from Mark Valentine
I was away from the site for a while, so I have some catching up to do on my favorite authors. I love the sentiment of this one (I think I know from your past writings who the "she" was, but I could be wrong). At any rate it is a gift to be able to know your own self-worth and not let it be subjected to the slings and arrows of others - I'm not there yet, but as I get older, I find I definitely care less about others opinions, and am better able to choose what feedback I let into my life.
Well done.
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I was away from the site for a while, so I have some catching up to do on my favorite authors. I love the sentiment of this one (I think I know from your past writings who the "she" was, but I could be wrong). At any rate it is a gift to be able to know your own self-worth and not let it be subjected to the slings and arrows of others - I'm not there yet, but as I get older, I find I definitely care less about others opinions, and am better able to choose what feedback I let into my life.
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
Comment from johnwilson
I love the picture and the words. I think I can interpret, from your author notes, the meaning; however, I would like to hear more. Well done, and I liked the way you placed the words on the page giving each word POWER! Bravo!
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I love the picture and the words. I think I can interpret, from your author notes, the meaning; however, I would like to hear more. Well done, and I liked the way you placed the words on the page giving each word POWER! Bravo!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I think from the picture and words, however sparse, I can work out the situation. I am proud you walked away with pride. An excellent poem well done Meia xx
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I think from the picture and words, however sparse, I can work out the situation. I am proud you walked away with pride. An excellent poem well done Meia xx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Aww there is so much more I want to know, very well written that leaves the reader trying to interpret the situation........maybe there will be a follow up.
Great stuff
Mitchell
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Aww there is so much more I want to know, very well written that leaves the reader trying to interpret the situation........maybe there will be a follow up.
Great stuff
Mitchell
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
Seems like two ex lovers or ex friends met by chance; but, one did not want to speak to the other one; thusly, this one had the courage to leave. Yes, it is good to have strength of character, especially if you think a person might not be good for you. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
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Seems like two ex lovers or ex friends met by chance; but, one did not want to speak to the other one; thusly, this one had the courage to leave. Yes, it is good to have strength of character, especially if you think a person might not be good for you. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
Comment from mvbrooks
A suggestion -- Lanturne poems are most often centered so that the "lantern" shape is revealed.
You've met the line and syllable count required. Interesting wording/subject as the short poem makes the reader imagine the rest of the story and it's written in a positive way that allows the reader to find his/her own story within the 5 lines.
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A suggestion -- Lanturne poems are most often centered so that the "lantern" shape is revealed.
You've met the line and syllable count required. Interesting wording/subject as the short poem makes the reader imagine the rest of the story and it's written in a positive way that allows the reader to find his/her own story within the 5 lines.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Obviously, this poem has more meaning for you than for the reader, but each person can relate to it and think of an incident that fits this poem. Good writing.
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Obviously, this poem has more meaning for you than for the reader, but each person can relate to it and think of an incident that fits this poem. Good writing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from jppoet
Congratulations, your artistry in this poem, especially given its laborious Lanturne difficulty, is exceptional and deserves Fanstory recognition. That said, I think your photo could have been improved for closer affinity to your text. Blessings, john
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Congratulations, your artistry in this poem, especially given its laborious Lanturne difficulty, is exceptional and deserves Fanstory recognition. That said, I think your photo could have been improved for closer affinity to your text. Blessings, john
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Marianne C.
There is so much I liked about this Lanturne form poem. First, the graphic image you selected. Second, your word choices made a powerful statement. I could really feel the passion of this poem. Additionally, ending the poem with the word "out" was genius!
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There is so much I liked about this Lanturne form poem. First, the graphic image you selected. Second, your word choices made a powerful statement. I could really feel the passion of this poem. Additionally, ending the poem with the word "out" was genius!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
Comment from Zue65
The poem is definitely short but it packs loaded message for the readers. You followed the requirements for writing Lanturne poetry, there are no grammar and spelling issues as well. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
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The poem is definitely short but it packs loaded message for the readers. You followed the requirements for writing Lanturne poetry, there are no grammar and spelling issues as well. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
