Detective Monroe
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Monroe meets his twin sister"Serial murderer and Detective have a commonality
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Comment from Ricky1024
Monroe meets her twin sister was very well written rich and seem as well as imagery with my grammar issues present here injecting injecting contents flow perfectly more excellent to strip the measures of line perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Monroe meets her twin sister was very well written rich and seem as well as imagery with my grammar issues present here injecting injecting contents flow perfectly more excellent to strip the measures of line perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your feedback
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An intriguing story that kept my interest throughout and now I'm wondering what is going to happen next! The paragraph beginning with 'sorry Kevin, this case has me distract(ed), you missed the 'ed' off distracted, easily fixed, good luck with your story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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An intriguing story that kept my interest throughout and now I'm wondering what is going to happen next! The paragraph beginning with 'sorry Kevin, this case has me distract(ed), you missed the 'ed' off distracted, easily fixed, good luck with your story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for your feedback and I will fix it.
