Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a lovely worded faith poem You have presented it beautifully. It was a jopy to read. Many blessings for a great weekend, Patricia
BTW, if you will do a search for Patricia Lawrence 3325 and Patricia Lawrence 3326 you will get the links to hear my life story done as a radio drama and you can hear it on the computer.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks I will do so.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Excellent monorhyme which gives us the essence of Hebrews 11:1. The one this that struck me in the first line was the phrase "weight in gold" as I wasn't sure about how to weigh "faith" or a "word" but I do know that it should be "its" not "it's" (it is). Good faith poem!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thank you for your kind review. I will edit my error! 💟

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

What a magnificient entry to the faith contest poetry and an excellently done monorhyme. A message of faith and love very well done

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thank you for your kind review 💖

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a delicious us of words that makes this poem fun to recite out loud. You also have a musical feel to your words and a spiritual feel to your poem. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks so much!💟