Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story for little children to teach them many things like why it is inportant to bath and be clean and that we should br loving and always have a smile that lights up our eyes.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Sandra.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Bouncy box was very well written racing team as well as imagery float without Red Robin no grammar issues as well I checked if an object the contents were both excellent firmly in place the strip two measures line perfectly thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks for your review, Ricky.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a lovely little story of Becka.
Lots of fun and well written.
You've described a cute little rascal here.
Well done and thank you for sharing this children's story with us.
Sharon


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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thank you for reading, Sharon. Have a lovely day.