Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and heart felt poem you have penned speaking from your son that is gone to Heaven. You used very good wording. Blessings my friend. Teri

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks Teri.
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Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is interesting in that it is written from the perspective of a person from Heaven.
He gives the view that his death changed life for him and his family. The death of one so young often does. It shows faith in internal life and in God's ability to forgive. It is taught though that people who commit suicide don't go to heaven.

I found to typos. In M short life should be In my short life. In the second to last paragraph though should be thought.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks Dragon Poet.
Dr Ricky 1024.

reply by dragonpoet on 20-Jan-2018

No problem, Dr Ricky.

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