Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning again, Ricky: This is another extremely heart wrenching poem about two of the most horrible losses in your life and so closely together. I did remember reading one of your poems about your wife's death. I am so sorry about this reality. I always said that it was better that my mother died before my two sisters were killed because some mothers cannot live with the reality of their children dying before they do. For me, it been extremely hard so I do know your pain my dear friend.

This was an awesome poem. Stay strong, my friend.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thanks again mystere for your beautiful thoughts and review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

A great poem extremely painful to read. I think tying in with positive message of organ donation is a great use of grief. Thank you for sharing such a emotional and raw experience.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks again dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

My heart goes out for you and your family
I know people say they know how you feel
Really?
Unless they walked in your shoes they will never know
My youngest son was murdered Dec 25...My youngest Daughter Dianne Died February 6 the day she went to the hospital for surgery she left a valentine card on my bedroom dresser
I know an d feel your pain yet blessed because they are with Him.
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

First My Dear Miss cookie my condolences for two of your losses I hope they weren't both recent I replied to your review earlier by going on your sight reading a little bit I see you have a lot of communication so you have a lot of friends which is good we both are right as we were both born in the month of October I was born later though your 38 on 54 but we're still older writers here thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

reply by misscookie on 22-Jan-2018

Thank you for those kind words my Dianne passed in 2006
Her brother in 1998 Hey we October people are good people and see the good in everyone... that scale blows my mind because some time I have a hard time to believe people for I have been hurt and used so many times specially by family.
I' m going to keep the faith no matter what.
Cookie

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Sometimes we are being watched by those who's passed away that leave so much Miss and love I am living proof dr. Ricky 1024

reply by misscookie on 22-Jan-2018

I know what you mean my daughter visits me often and I enjoy it.
Cookie

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This poem speaks oracle, dead will come back alive within thirty days, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks Al Creator always a pleasure seeing you review my work doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this tribute to your son and his organ donation. Your telling this tragic story in his voice is extraordinarily compelling. I cannot send enough condolences for the loss of your son and your wife. Take good care of yourself- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thanks Joan you're so sweet when I write about things like this which is a parent's worst light Nightmare and you suddenly placed into the shittiest Club on Earth most people have no idea or understand especially those I've never had children obviously you do thanks dr. Ricky 1024

reply by Joan E. on 21-Jan-2018

I have only one 40-year-old, bachelor son, and cannot imagine losing him. Your evocative verse makes me want to reach out, hug him and hold him close to my heart. Sighs- Joan

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Excellent POV, I love the way you put yourself in other shoes and lead us on a journey of life and down a lane that haunts yu so much

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thank you Barbara for your kind words and review as always. They Ricky 1024

Comment from apky

Excellent

Hello Doc,

Always keep your faith and hope high, as I also pray for you.
One day, the Lord has promised, there will be peace and joy.

"How well I wish I could forget...
"The Careless as well as Fateless Day in March...
"And, not November...
"For Better Of Worse...
"For Richer Or Poorer...
"Til Death Do Is(Us) Part."

Bless,
Apky

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Aki.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Wow! I am moved and don't know what to say. So, obviously a good job. I jumped to review this poem. I thought I might actually know you. A distant relative of mine named Jason had a son who died in a car accident last year. Age 18. Clearly not you, but I certainly identify with the poem and the life-changing effects of accidental deaths. Good luck to you in the competition.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks Debbie Pope and your friend who lost their 18 year old Jason if you know them personally tell them about me and my Jason also tell them welcome to the shittiest Club on Earth to be included in it or indoctrinated you need to lose your son dr. Ricci 1024 thanks for your review that's your job

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This is most unusual. The first poem I have ever read when the writer has already passed and writes from Heaven. It carries a message from the deceased who was only 18 years old that to donate an organ, perhaps the heart, of one deceased could save the life of one lving and in need of one. Well done. Dorothy

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

I've done a few of these were I've given him the credit a couple of times he knows that he's writing it through his father May of course all the times like I give him full credit as I did with this one so I pushed posted him first of course thanks for your kind review dr. Ricky 1024 and have a wonderful week

Comment from Sam Roote

Exceptional

Wow! That was an amazing poem. One of the most powerful things I have ever read. The subject and the story that was told almost had me in tears on a Saturday morning. I have sympathy for Jason but he is a part of you. I did notice by his birth date that I am only 2 days older than him. May he rest in peace.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks same to that makes you being born on the 3rd of November 1984 Jason's friend possibly who passed away in 2009 for an apparent heroin overdose crashes car in the woods back in Stafford Township in December to 3 weeks to find them the imagine with the temperatures what he looked like he was born on the 10th of November 1984 so there's three of you guys of course you're the only living member left in the club if you want to call it that but I'm in a club be able to be in my club God forbid you have to go through that is a lose your only son called the shittiest Club on Earth I have already indoctrinated three members here on fan story who lost her children one Barbara Henderson lost her twins another one tier King at lost a lot of family members including her son they're both in it I put the third one and even though she didn't lose her son she lost her 14 year old daughter decapitated in a car accident Jason was so beautifully written even though I didn't comment that he was raccoon severely brain damage in a coma and his head was swollen along with his eyes those things I don't put in unless I'm writing about the accident of course thanks for your review dr. Ricky 1024