Abstruse Inquiry
Commentary: A house divided cannot stand.22 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A wonderful poem I enjoyed this exceptionally '
When all of this is over
And we arrive at its end
I'll remember...vaguely,
I once called you, "friend" ...'
I know just what you mean and can totally resonated with it. Kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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A wonderful poem I enjoyed this exceptionally '
When all of this is over
And we arrive at its end
I'll remember...vaguely,
I once called you, "friend" ...'
I know just what you mean and can totally resonated with it. Kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hello Meia,
Thank you for your thoughtful review. This was a challenge to pen!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your rhyming poem entry. I found it so poignant and true. It is very well written with excellent rhyme. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed reading your rhyming poem entry. I found it so poignant and true. It is very well written with excellent rhyme. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm sure if we really thought about it we could find a reason to hate every single person we meet. The challenging part, and maybe the most important part, is finding a way to love them through whatever imperfections we may find. I work retail and I could find many reason to hate certain people, people are jerks, but you just gotta breathe. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I'm sure if we really thought about it we could find a reason to hate every single person we meet. The challenging part, and maybe the most important part, is finding a way to love them through whatever imperfections we may find. I work retail and I could find many reason to hate certain people, people are jerks, but you just gotta breathe. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned about this day and age. You used very good descriptive wording and really nice art work. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned about this day and age. You used very good descriptive wording and really nice art work. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello Teri!
Thank you for your positive review!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. The message, the content, the rhyme scheme. The message is timeless and should be embraced. I hope it's not to late for the eyes of the masses to be opened. It is thought provoking and very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I like this. The message, the content, the rhyme scheme. The message is timeless and should be embraced. I hope it's not to late for the eyes of the masses to be opened. It is thought provoking and very well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello Jeff!
So pleased you enjoyed. Thank you for your positive review.
Comment from RGstar
Different rhyme patterns here, but equally, if not more, effective.
Apart from the strong subject matter, you give us depth and purpose with a certain emphasis in the various places of importance. Bravo.
Hope this does well for you.
Have a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Different rhyme patterns here, but equally, if not more, effective.
Apart from the strong subject matter, you give us depth and purpose with a certain emphasis in the various places of importance. Bravo.
Hope this does well for you.
Have a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your keen eye = intended. I wrote this offering as if I were speaking to the individuals intended. Given the climate of the times, I attempted to make the words ebb and flow while maintaining balance. It was a challenge.
Thank you for your kind thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from mvbrooks
I agree with your sentiments and appreciate the confident rhyme in this poem. I did find it a bit "disjointed" in terms of my "mind's ear" -- as I read it, my mind's voice stumbled in places because of the extra syllables in some lines and the changes in cadence/pacing between the verses. Well done from a storyline and rhyme point-of-view.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I agree with your sentiments and appreciate the confident rhyme in this poem. I did find it a bit "disjointed" in terms of my "mind's ear" -- as I read it, my mind's voice stumbled in places because of the extra syllables in some lines and the changes in cadence/pacing between the verses. Well done from a storyline and rhyme point-of-view.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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This is why recognition thing as well as Andrea flood well-read well and no grammar issues as well descriptive measure for firmly in place I ejected much at the conference line perfectly thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Much appreciation for your review!
Thank you!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Mrs KT, this is a really well written poem in good mixed rhyme. As I read through this poem I assumed you were talking about the state of society in general and making political statements. It certainly suited that scenario. But you revealed the person for whom it was meant. Someone who was once a friend - Wow! You certainly made a point. Well done and warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hi Mrs KT, this is a really well written poem in good mixed rhyme. As I read through this poem I assumed you were talking about the state of society in general and making political statements. It certainly suited that scenario. But you revealed the person for whom it was meant. Someone who was once a friend - Wow! You certainly made a point. Well done and warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello Dorothy,
Much appreciation for your kind and thoughtful review.
diane
Comment from Rasmine
Good rhyming. It says a lot about how you feel. But if something is bothering another person, and it is something they can't help or are being injured, we can't turn our heads. But sometimes we need a little break. :)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Good rhyming. It says a lot about how you feel. But if something is bothering another person, and it is something they can't help or are being injured, we can't turn our heads. But sometimes we need a little break. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello Rasmine!
Much appreciation for your thoughtful review!
diane
