The Death of a Post
Sometimes an idea to write about dies suddenly.41 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Brigitte, LOL...join the rest of us...I used to sleep with a pen and paper by my bed...so when something hits me...I could write it...I can't tell you how many half written poems I have...LOL...I start writing...and some distracts me...and I lose it...LOL...I love your poem my sweet friend...and the picture...perfect...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Brigitte, LOL...join the rest of us...I used to sleep with a pen and paper by my bed...so when something hits me...I could write it...I can't tell you how many half written poems I have...LOL...I start writing...and some distracts me...and I lose it...LOL...I love your poem my sweet friend...and the picture...perfect...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read. I now keep a journal by my bed and hope I can decipher the scribbles when I wake.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
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sounds like a great idea...you have a great weekend as well...love xxoo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A cute and clever poem with a lovely style about an event which happens to us all from time to time. My best ideas do come late at night which doesn't do much for sleep, but when the inspiration strikes--go with it. Great poem, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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A cute and clever poem with a lovely style about an event which happens to us all from time to time. My best ideas do come late at night which doesn't do much for sleep, but when the inspiration strikes--go with it. Great poem, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review and taking the time to read.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The poem reminisces dilemma of a writer, most especially, when his itinerary is saddled with lots of activities; and when faced with health challenges.
The work highlights the importance of promptly setting out to write when the inspiration comes and to go for a tranquilizer, when emotionally disturbed.
The work earns it's advisory texture through the use of rhymes, metaphors, alliteration and onomatopoeia.
Outstanding work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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The poem reminisces dilemma of a writer, most especially, when his itinerary is saddled with lots of activities; and when faced with health challenges.
The work highlights the importance of promptly setting out to write when the inspiration comes and to go for a tranquilizer, when emotionally disturbed.
The work earns it's advisory texture through the use of rhymes, metaphors, alliteration and onomatopoeia.
Outstanding work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Wow! Thank you for glowing and positive review. It will spur met to keep on writing. Thank you very much for reading and the positive support. I am humbled. I do not believe that we have met on this before and I am flattered.
Blessings,
:)Brigitte
Comment from Wetbelly01
I know exactly what you're saying!...
I myself have gone through the very same thing (and still do)!...
Great poem!... Nice smooth rhythm and rhyme...
No problems with it at all that I see...
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I know exactly what you're saying!...
I myself have gone through the very same thing (and still do)!...
Great poem!... Nice smooth rhythm and rhyme...
No problems with it at all that I see...
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely and positive review. One good thing that came from this experience is this poem.
Thank you for reading.
Have a great day!
:)Brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know that feeling Brigitte, you have a thought about a write, and if you don't write it down straight away it's gone! I think the mind runs rings around us at night! I could identify with this write, I liked the repetitive words to drive home your message, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I know that feeling Brigitte, you have a thought about a write, and if you don't write it down straight away it's gone! I think the mind runs rings around us at night! I could identify with this write, I liked the repetitive words to drive home your message, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I am glad that you read and commented. The lovely outcome? I managed to write a poem about the experience.
The repetitive words came from the ticking clock and went straight to my head.
Thank you for your lovely review.
Have a wonderful day, my friend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Dan Diego
Gosh. I don't know how many times I've woken up with a brilliant idea for a story or lately, an edit to a story. Anyway, great little rhyme. I like the repetition. I jogged my mind into the cadence of the poem. Of course, the message is clear. You need a tape recorder at your bedside. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Gosh. I don't know how many times I've woken up with a brilliant idea for a story or lately, an edit to a story. Anyway, great little rhyme. I like the repetition. I jogged my mind into the cadence of the poem. Of course, the message is clear. You need a tape recorder at your bedside. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I guess from the reviews I am not alone. Thank you for reading and the nice comments. When the reader can relate, it was worth the write.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
Comment from Mistydawn
What a cute but realistic poem. A fun read. I don' know how many times I've woke up with an idea only to find it's forgotten before I can write it down or that it wasn't such a hot idea after all.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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What a cute but realistic poem. A fun read. I don' know how many times I've woke up with an idea only to find it's forgotten before I can write it down or that it wasn't such a hot idea after all.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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It probably was a great idea and it will come back at another inopportune time. Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. It is nice to know I am not alone with this dilemma.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Brigitte;
Oh, no. I hate when an idea just flits through my head for a moment and then - just like that - it's gone. It's as if it was never there! Oh, dear, dear friend.
The nice thing about it; you DID manage to get a well-written poem that almost all of us can relate to,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi, Brigitte;
Oh, no. I hate when an idea just flits through my head for a moment and then - just like that - it's gone. It's as if it was never there! Oh, dear, dear friend.
The nice thing about it; you DID manage to get a well-written poem that almost all of us can relate to,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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It happens, doesn't it. You seem to fend off memory loss ,
for your writing continues with excellence.
I really want to get back to my style, serious, family, faith, and personal posts with a twist. I seem to have lost the knack, temporarily, I hope.
Have a great day and thank you reading and the lovely comments.
:)Brigitte
Comment from emptypage
OMG, I do this, too, and it makes me nuts. I tried keeping a voice recorder by the bed so I could say it and go back to sleep, but I couldn't understand my sleepy slurred speech.
Funny. Good write.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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OMG, I do this, too, and it makes me nuts. I tried keeping a voice recorder by the bed so I could say it and go back to sleep, but I couldn't understand my sleepy slurred speech.
Funny. Good write.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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That is funny. Never tried that technique; I can't read my late night sleep induced scribbles. Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I did manage to get a poem out of the experience,lol.
Have a great day!
:)Brigitte
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I know what you mean. My best work comes to me when I'm in the shower, but by the time I get to write them done, it's lame.
Your verse is well written and a lot of fun.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I know what you mean. My best work comes to me when I'm in the shower, but by the time I get to write them done, it's lame.
Your verse is well written and a lot of fun.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Ha ha, I can relate to the shower ideas, too. The images though, not so pretty and better left alone. Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it. I am having a difficult getting back to my usual style, serious, personal, and faith inspired. Time, I hope is on my side...
Have a great day.
:) Brigitte
