The Death of a Post
Sometimes an idea to write about dies suddenly.41 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Brigitte! I love the cacophony of words. I think you have something really clever with this one.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Brigitte! I love the cacophony of words. I think you have something really clever with this one.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This somewhat different from my usual poetry. I really appreciate this excellent review and support. It has gotten positive feedback and I puchased the image. You have made my day! Thank you from the bottom of my heart
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
Comment from dragonpoet
I like the triple rhyming words in the even lines. This does tell of the stages of writing and how inspiration comes and goes as it pleases.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I like the triple rhyming words in the even lines. This does tell of the stages of writing and how inspiration comes and goes as it pleases.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you kindly for this encouragement. Don't know why but my style seems to be changing!
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
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You are so kindly welcome, Brigitte.
Same to you.
Joan
Comment from smileycloud
VERY TRUE
You have written it well that illusive idea
nice layout
good chorus/thyming lines
even when you do get it out before it gets muddles when you read it back to oneself it can sound weird like; "where did that come from"? and you end up deleting it and then wondering if you were MEANT to write it
lol
good work
have a smiley day/night
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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VERY TRUE
You have written it well that illusive idea
nice layout
good chorus/thyming lines
even when you do get it out before it gets muddles when you read it back to oneself it can sound weird like; "where did that come from"? and you end up deleting it and then wondering if you were MEANT to write it
lol
good work
have a smiley day/night
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you for these lovely comments. Yes, ideas spring up like dandelions and sometimes are quickly lifted away by the wind. I appreciate the reading.
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
Comment from closetpoetjester
Haha great post! I have a problem when I go off to bed and suddenly get a great line or two then seem to have faith I'll remember it in the morning...NOT!
I don't know how many great poems I've lost, due to sheer laziness at the time haha
I'm always convinced I'll remember such brilliance, but by morning its a damn distant memory.
Not to worry. I have Writers Flood. LOL
Well written
Cheers P
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Haha great post! I have a problem when I go off to bed and suddenly get a great line or two then seem to have faith I'll remember it in the morning...NOT!
I don't know how many great poems I've lost, due to sheer laziness at the time haha
I'm always convinced I'll remember such brilliance, but by morning its a damn distant memory.
Not to worry. I have Writers Flood. LOL
Well written
Cheers P
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I love it, "Writers Flood". This is a possible great idea for a post. Thank you for reading and encouraging comments. I now keep a journal by my bed and hope that I can decipher my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
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Already written it LOL
Comment from c_lucas
Most of our muses are cursed with a sense of humor. Why would I sleep be interrupted by "That Thought?" I get my best ideas while falling asleep. To make matters worse, a fog horn goes off to assure I am awake.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Most of our muses are cursed with a sense of humor. Why would I sleep be interrupted by "That Thought?" I get my best ideas while falling asleep. To make matters worse, a fog horn goes off to assure I am awake.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and encouraging comments. I now keep a journal by my bed and hope that I can decipher my scribbles in the morning. A foghorn? Hmmm...Readers have related to this in a positive manner.
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
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You're welcome, Brigitte. Charlie
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This keeps popping up. Sorry.
Brigitte
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha from Hawaii, I enjoyed how you brought the triple words into your poem. It's true how the spider can Spin Spin Spin and catch me its the web.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Aloha from Hawaii, I enjoyed how you brought the triple words into your poem. It's true how the spider can Spin Spin Spin and catch me its the web.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and encouraging comments. I now keep a journal by my bed and hope that I can decipher my scribbles in the morning. Wish I were there, a trip to your lovely Hawaii is on my bucket list
Have a great Sunday!
:)Brigitte
Comment from Teri7
Brigitte, This is a very well written poem about you waking up to words that you can't seem to get on paper. You used very good wording and imagery to show your disgust for not being able to put your words to paper! love, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Brigitte, This is a very well written poem about you waking up to words that you can't seem to get on paper. You used very good wording and imagery to show your disgust for not being able to put your words to paper! love, Teri
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I think that this is exactly what happens when writing. So many things swirling around, trying to refocus. If you don't have a pen and paper right away, then, it's probably lost. You captured this brilliantly. I applaud this work. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I think that this is exactly what happens when writing. So many things swirling around, trying to refocus. If you don't have a pen and paper right away, then, it's probably lost. You captured this brilliantly. I applaud this work. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
Comment from pbomar1115
Brigitte, this is a great ideal. When I'm in the mood, free from the burden that seems to suddenly stack up, I write. They vanish just a quick, bringing comfort and ideals. However, that has not happened as of yet. But I'm getting there as I stick, stick, stick with the problems until I'm free, free, free. There is something infectious about people who are happy. They give me light to see through my dark days. I benefited from this poem, Brigitte.
Phillip
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Brigitte, this is a great ideal. When I'm in the mood, free from the burden that seems to suddenly stack up, I write. They vanish just a quick, bringing comfort and ideals. However, that has not happened as of yet. But I'm getting there as I stick, stick, stick with the problems until I'm free, free, free. There is something infectious about people who are happy. They give me light to see through my dark days. I benefited from this poem, Brigitte.
Phillip
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I am so happy to hear you say that your are going to stick stick stick. I will shine a light your way if it helps. I can message you daily, to write write write! You are my friend and I yours! NOw...get off your butt and write something down.
:)Brigitte
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Hahaha. I wish I could sit down on my butt to write. And no, I can't give up because I'm single and live alone, which makes me content. But the condition requires me and me only to make all decisions. The price is huge but worth it for a man these days. Women are extremely ambitious and view men from a sisterhood perspective. They have a take no prisoners movement going on. Nevertheless, I will continue to write what I think is worth reading. I'm a little slow, but I am making preparation to write something. Thanks for the encouraging words, Brigitte.
Phillip
Comment from mvbrooks
I enjoyed the alternating lines that gave a sense of urgency to the poem. You've taken a very relate-able scenario and made a poem that captures the emotions of excitement (at the idea), urgency (write it before you forget it) and loss (what do these notes really mean). I've wondered at many of my notes as well.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed the alternating lines that gave a sense of urgency to the poem. You've taken a very relate-able scenario and made a poem that captures the emotions of excitement (at the idea), urgency (write it before you forget it) and loss (what do these notes really mean). I've wondered at many of my notes as well.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I now keep a journal by the bed and hope that I can read my scribbles in the morning.
Have a great weekend.
:)Brigitte
